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LIVING ON THE DEFENSIVE

Posted by Biggus on August 12, 2011 - 08:07
from the ABC set ROMANTICALLY INCLINED TALES - NEW LOVE

She told me that she loved me
And I didn't know how to react
I’m afraid to say I love her
I want to keep my heart intact
Is it time to let down my guard?
Should I tell her how I feel?
What if she is false or insincere
My heart may never heal
Should I expose my feelings?
Even though I feel insecure
But if I keep my feelings secret
Or wait until I am certain sure
I risk undermining her love
Blemishing it at its very start
And I could lose her love forever
And that would break my heart

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Prettyrose | August 12, 2011 - 10:17

Brilliant :) straightforward and just how I would put it, (not that I am a expert hehe) Just meant That's How I see people who can't or wont open up and a perfect way to express it.

I could see lots of people using this on greeting cards ( I would on mine, if I had thought of it. )or a wider field.

Well done.

Keep Writing
Keep Smiling :)

Biggus | August 12, 2011 - 10:51

Thanks Prettyrose its very kind of you to say so.