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MARY CHRISTMAS

Posted by Biggus on December 28, 2011 - 12:07
from the ABC set CHRISTMAS TALES - HUMOUR

Before Mary Christmas
Married Santa Claus
She had some concerns
And decided to take pause
To discuss a pre-nup
Within the current laws
She was not concerned
With any character flaws
She just wanted the security
Of a get out Claus

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Comments

Denzella | December 28, 2011 - 20:36

Found this very amusing but, and I am no expert, I felt that an 'a' should have come before pause and later I also felt it didn't scan.

However, I really liked the poem and felt it was very topical.

Denzella | December 28, 2011 - 20:37

Found this very amusing but, and I am no expert, I felt that an 'a' should have come before pause and later I also felt it didn't scan.

However, I really liked the poem and felt it was very topical.

Denzella | December 28, 2011 - 20:38

Found this very amusing but, and I am no expert, I felt that an 'a' should have come before pause and later I also felt it didn't scan.

However, I really liked the poem and felt it was very topical.

Denzella | December 28, 2011 - 20:40

Don't know how that happened but hey two for the price of one.

Biggus | December 28, 2011 - 23:08

Thanks