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SENIOR HIGH

Posted by Biggus on April 24, 2008 - 07:36
from the ABC set SENIOR MOMENTS

I haven’t felt myself lately
The symptoms seldom vary
Lethargy, listlessness and apathy
And if I stand up quick, I go dizzy
My son said as a matter of fact
He has to smoke two joints to feel like that

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animan | April 24, 2008 - 07:48

I liked the economy and wry tone in this. It's amazing to say so much in just six lines. I also liked the semi-rhymes, the -y rhymes that prepare the reader for the idea of dizziness coming up, and the 'act + at' rhyme that sounds so matter of fact. Clever.