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SWEET LOVE SONG

Posted by Biggus on June 8, 2011 - 09:34
from the ABC set ROMANTICALLY INCLINED TALES - ROMANCE

Each word leaving
Your sweet lips
Is like a velvet caress
Your words are like poetry
Each syllable, honey coated
Every sentence
Dripping with nuance
The formed verses
Of loves refrain
All at once
Lightening my heart
And touching my soul

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Highhat | June 8, 2011 - 10:45

Etheral !! ;))

Biggus | June 8, 2011 - 10:54

Thank you kindly Pia

well-wisher | June 11, 2011 - 12:03

This was a wonderful description of a love song.

Sadly so many modern love songs are more saccharine
than really sweet.

I particularly liked the honey coated syllables.

A truly scrumptious poem.

Biggus | June 11, 2011 - 12:35

Thank you for the sweet comments
Paul