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YOU MUST KNOW I LOVE YOU

Posted by Biggus on January 12, 2011 - 09:00
from the ABC set ROMANTICALLY INCLINED TALES - VARIOUS

You must know I love you
I hope I show you that I do
For the sweetest moments in my life
Are the ones I spend with you

You are my first thought
When I awake to the new day
And the last thing on my mind
At night when I drift away

I wish I could tell you
Of the love that’s in my heart
I want you to feel the depth of love
I’ve felt for you from the start

I would use sweet phrases
And sugary words of love
The sweetest ever known
Speaking of columbine and dove

No the words that I must choose
Are the simplest that I can use
What I'm feeling deep inside
Is the deepest love for you

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Comments

Prettyrose | January 15, 2011 - 23:45

hi Biggus :) I like how you have writen your Poem not just with sheer quality but also straight forward and easy to read, some poem/stories e.t.c are brilliant but can take you away from the real meaning because it could take 3 attempts to read them and then you still feel lost in it all, then some writers can start to feel not as good as that particular one but were all the same in my eyes just different ways of saying the same things.

keep writing :)

Cavalcaderl | January 16, 2011 - 00:00

new Biggus
Hello! this is truly lovely
romantic poem stating from morning
till night meaning of love.
It can be used in all kinds of way
or even if things gone wrong,they still
say it anyway.Some don't use that word
at all, they can tease you like mad,when
angry say I Love You or some use a nick-name.
julie x

Biggus | January 16, 2011 - 10:24

Thanks Prettyrose

Biggus | January 16, 2011 - 10:24

Thanks Julie

Nolan | January 28, 2011 - 16:04

Beautiful Paul. For me the poem is about a mother thinking of her little child.
~ δ ~
Cheers! Nolan

Biggus | January 28, 2011 - 16:14

Thanks Nolan