Let's Start Again, Mr Cameron


from the ABC set Good Grief

Dear Mr Cameron,

My name is Jenny Dobson. I am 14 years old and live just outside Bolton with my parents and my brother.

I am writing this letter to you because my mum and dad are in trouble and I am scared that they will be put in jail.

I love my parents very much and I know they try their best to keep out of trouble but it’s now got so bad that I can’t sleep at night.

My teacher said that I was very clever for my age last year but I’ve missed a lot of days since then and she’s left now. Our new teacher is very strict and thinks he’s clever, but no one can understand him and he can’t even spell!

My dad lost his job two years ago and is not coping with being unemployed. He was always fine when he was working and we always had food and clothes and holidays, but now he’s totally changed.

He has started drinking and when my mum gets angry with him for being lazy, he storms out of the house and doesn’t come back for days. While he is away, I stop myself from eating thinking it will make him come back quicker if he’s worrying about me and I have lost a lot of weight.

After he lost his job, dad kept telling me that he was doing well ‘ducking and diving’ but then the police caught him selling supermarket food in the pubs.
The food wasn't past the sell-by date and it had been thrown away but because dad took it from the supermarket bins, the police said it was stealing. The supermarket wanted to prosecute him but the police decided to only give him a caution but he’s angry because it still shows up when he applies for jobs.

Dad was never racist before he lost his job and had lots of foreign friends but now he says he hates all foreigners when he’s drunk and I’ve stopped going out to the shops with him because he shouts at them. I know it’s not my real dad because he was always so kind and courteous to absolutely everyone when he was working.

Mum says that it won’t be long before he’s reported but he doesn’t seem to care. We go hungry most days and the electricity will be turned off unless we pay the bill, which mum says is way over what we paid last year.

Jason (my big brother) and I haven’t had any new clothes since dad lost his job and my school uniform doesn’t fit anymore, which is the main reason I don’t like going much.

The biggest problem is that the TV was bought on mum’s old credit card and she hasn’t paid for the license this year. The TV licensing people keep writing red letters that say they might put her in jail, but she won’t do anything about it. I don’t watch TV anymore because I’m scared they’ll catch me and put mum in jail. I prefer reading anyway.

She has started taking pills and spends a lot of time in bed now.

Jason gets in trouble with the police most weeks, usually for stealing, smashing things up and fighting. He was thrown out of school last year for truancy and spends most his time smoking dope and drinking with his friends. Mum and dad think he’ll be put in jail before long.

Although I love my brother very much, we don’t get along now because he keeps telling me he wants to be my pimp and knows a lot of men who fancy me. I hate it when he says that they like skinny white girls because I’m not that skinny.

I know everyone in our street and there’s only one family whose dad still works but he never talks to anyone any more. Dad reckons he'll lose his job soon because the council are thinking of closing down the old people's home where he cooks. There are three dads in jail but there are lots of others that have left home. Two of our street's mothers do part-time work at the sweatshop but mum says they only got the job to keep the equal rights people happy.
‘One big happy family,’ she calls it.

The last time I went outside with dad, he was a bit drunk and he took me to a street where the Asians live. There were nice cars and the children were all dressed well and when dad told me that all the dads had jobs and that all the children were doing well at school, he burst into tears. I didn’t see him for days after that and when he came back, he had a broken nose and three broken ribs.

That was when I told him that I don’t eat when he goes away but he still does it. He says he can’t stand being useless and is ashamed of himself, and I think he goes off to drink to stop himself from causing trouble with mum.

Please, Mr Cameron, help to find my dad a job. He’s not a bad man and works very hard. All he needs is a chance to start again. It’s all he talks about when he’s not drinking and I know that he means it with all his heart. His previous job was as a street cleaner where he worked for nineteen years and the only reason he lost his job was because the company that bought the business from the council needed to cut down the staff.

He only has one conviction (for affray) but that was only because of his drinking which he has now promised to give up. He has a clean driving license and is prepared to work for the minimum wage anywhere in the country as long as it’s full-time.

When he was employed, we didn’t have a lot but we never ever got in trouble and I always went to school.

I don’t want to do prostitution. There are two girls I don't see any more and I know what happened to them.

Please help me.

Yours truly,

Jenny Dobson.

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Comments

SundaysChild | June 27, 2011 - 13:43

I think this is great; really well written and a clever idea being a letter. I've been thinking about writing pieces in letter form, and this is inspiring. Good luck with the comp.

Highhat | June 27, 2011 - 14:01

Great one for Let's start again Richard. Such bad times- really broke me up

Good luck
;)Pia

Cavalcaderl | June 28, 2011 - 08:45

new Blighters rock
Very very good story,all so true to life!
Sometimes,We wre family 8 just like you have written,
no clothes no money no shoes,no help and illness.
Did you know the girl,and type for her, or is it your
own story I imagine, very good one for Let's start again comp; good luck.
julie xx

David Maidment | June 28, 2011 - 17:41

Richard, as you know, Railway Children is concerned for just such children as these - the scenario you paint is typical of the stories children living on the street told about the circumstances that started them there. We're trying to pilot contact with schools and counselling children at risk in the first couple of years of secondary school - children identified by the teachers of being very vulnerable. Initially we're trying the programme out around Sheffield, with a couple of other pilot areas ready.

RachelPatricia | June 30, 2011 - 10:15

Lost for words a bit, blighters - both by this amazing entry and your obvious passion for the cause.

I think your idea sounds brilliant - I was a bit of a Jenny myself growing up - very vulnerable - and if I'd have had a place like you envision to escape to during my teens, I probably could've realised the potential I'm only just now discovering within myself a lot sooner.

I'm not very political nor completely up to date with all current affairs, but when I read this letter and look around the place I live and at the people I know, who are struggling day in and day out and at the children who suffer for it, it's so bloody obvious and so utterly heartbreaking. I totally admire your dedication and think this needs to be used in a campaign of some sort - you're right, sending it directly to Cameron wouldn't get you anywhere, but let the masses see this and you'll have a whole army ready to help build these havens you speak of. I for one will be there with my wellies and dungarees on, spade in hand - might not be much use, like, but if not I do a real mean cuppa ;)

Thanks for a brilliant read, you've put a fire in my belly with this today and I really hope it does well in the comp, it certainly deserves to :)

Rachel xx

insertponceyfre... | June 30, 2011 - 21:28

I agree with sundayschild - a very good idea to use the letter form for this story - I really enjoyed it.

"I stop myself from eating thinking it will make him comes back quicker if he’s worrying about me and I have lost a lot of weight." - you should have a comma between eating and thinking, also should be "come back"

..and one other little thing: you would get free school lunch if you had no income.

I enjoyed the discussion afterwards too. Good luck with the competition!

David Maidment | July 1, 2011 - 07:49

Richard,
Your suggestions of what sort of environment would help such vulnerable children ties in with our experience in India. We have programmes in North India and Bombay where street children have taken part in rock climbing and other testing physical activities - it gives them self confidence and a feeling of self-worth and also promotes a reliance on team work with children who often have never learned to trust anyone. One small group of girls from Darjeeling even got a bronze medal in a national competition! We had a partner who did similar work in this country, taking the children into the Cumbrian hills and lakes.

We've found the same response with music, especially classical music. For some reason learning the violin in particular has brought an extraordinary transformation in some of the young Indian children we care for. And think about the Venezualan orchestra formed of children from the favellas - inspired by Gustav Dudamel (I think I have his name nearly right) also from the Caracas slums. I heard them play at the London proms - magnificent! Let's meet as you say and see if we can build on this. There's no one way that suits all children.

Kurt Rellians | July 1, 2011 - 22:37

A good and effective piece. It shows just how families can get into a downward spiral of low self esteem and reduced options. To build a better society we should be helping everyone within our society to find a place where they can flourish. Everyone needs useful and worthwhile employment.

oldpesky | July 4, 2011 - 16:35

Hi Blighters, as with all your stuff this piece is very well written, But it's the message that strikes a chord with me in this one. Right up my street, literally. Best of luck with it in the old comperoony.

MrsB | July 4, 2011 - 17:31

I thought this letter was great - empathetic but not sentimental. And seeing the discussion that's unfolded you can tell what a big impact it's already had on your readers. That kind of resonance is something I hope I can achieve in future writing, so hats off to you!
Good luck,
Mrs B