Life rushes onward
eager for death eternal
life is but a whim.
~~~
Life is a bright light
a day time, a flash, a glare
before deaths dark night.
~~~
Time drags in prospect
yet gone in a brief heartbeat
retrospectively.
~~~
The Sun bathes my skin
I am warm and calm within
Oh serenity
~~~
Comments
MistakenMagic | January 7, 2009 - 16:04
I love the rhythm created by these four little gems Val. The second haiku is my favourite!
Magic xxx
Bradene | January 7, 2009 - 18:22
Thanks magic I love to write these little things, when they work they are very satisfying. love Val x
threeleafshamrock | January 7, 2009 - 20:40
Love it! The second and third especially; the truth of those oppose any levity. Believe me, at my age, I know, ;)
Bradene | January 8, 2009 - 01:05
Thanks, I do believe you, I'm almost 66 years old. Val (;
yrene | January 8, 2009 - 01:19
Oh I love this Val!
It has four times the intensity of a refreshing haiku.
Brilliant write.
(^_^)
best regards,
yReNe