Coming With Age


from the ABC set Life's Funny Little Foibles

Life trickles on
in a quiet fashion
gone the hustle
the bustle
the passion;
the joy
the wonder
of youth in a hurry;
the birthing of children
the financial worry.

Gone the horror
of putting on weight
ruining my figure
being late
for a date;
I don't see the need
to run for a bus;
fall out with my neighbour
or kick up a fuss.

I've learned to be patient
even sublime;
not to rush around madly
to bide my time;
most things come
to those who wait
finding it nicer
to anticipate.

My life has slowed
to a gentler pace;
I appreciate patience
with a little grace.
Now, I have the notion
to look at a flower;
to treasure each second
each minute and hour.

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Comments

Nathan Bednarek | January 9, 2009 - 21:15

‘I appreciate patience
with a little grace.’

For some reason I’m drawn to these lines, but the poem is wonderful as a whole. The rhythm is perfect- I can almost hear some music playing in the background. I wonder what you were listening to when you wrote this ;-)

Great work.

Nathan.

yrene | January 10, 2009 - 10:44

This is a very lovely poem.
It's gentle, mellow,
and easy on the mind.
Can't help but smile.

(^_^)
best regards,
yReNe

Bradene | January 14, 2009 - 11:38

Thanks Nathan, you are kind, I'm not sure that I was listening to music when I wrote this, it was just the way I was feeling at the time. Val x

Bradene | January 14, 2009 - 11:39

Thanks Yrene, I'm glad I was able to make you smile. Val x