Green Girl Of The Sixties


from the ABC set Life's Funny Little Foibles

Mellow yellow banana skins
were never the thing for me.
The electrical banana
I escaped virtuously,

for I was a naïve girl
who just saw the yellow sun,
and the golden colour of butter
spread over my currant bun.

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Comments

Silver Spun Sand | November 25, 2010 - 11:13

Donovon - 'Mellow Yellow' around 1966...if my memory serves me correctly;-) As for the 'electrical banana'...now that's another thing!!

Enjoyed this immensely, Val. Brought the memories flooding back;-)

Tina xx

Bradene | November 25, 2010 - 12:34

Thanks Tina I'm glad it bought back happy memories for you. Love Valx

MistakenMagic | November 25, 2010 - 13:05

Long before my time, Val - but I enjoyed this nevertheless! Concise, but very, very beautiful and resonant.

Magic xxx

Bradene | November 25, 2010 - 13:25

Thanks Magic perhaps it would benefit you if you Googled to enable you to understand. Google Donovan or Mellow yellow. Valx

SundaysChild | November 25, 2010 - 14:57

Is that -'they call me mellow yellow?'- if so, I love that song.
Enjoyed this poem. x

Bradene | November 25, 2010 - 15:05

Yes that's the one, but if you read up on it you'll see it has hidden depths. Thanks for commenting. Valx

SundaysChild | November 25, 2010 - 15:07

I shall investigate! x

Bradene | November 25, 2010 - 15:26

Good for you (;