~~
He treats me like a wristwatch
a really neat trick,
he’ll glance at me occasionally
wind me up, and let me tick..
I let him get away with it,
I let him off the hook.
I tick away and wait for him
to throw that special look.
He treats me like a wristwatch,
he’ll use me to mark his time
and when there ‘s no need to hurry
he’ll sometimes let me chime.
I let him get away with it,
one day he’ll wind too much;
he’ll overstretch this spring of mine
by just one tiny notch.
He treats me like a wristwatch,
he wears me like a strap;
one of these fine days though
he’ll crank me up and then I'm gonna ... Sssnnaaap ****!!.

Comments
christajoyce | December 3, 2008 - 21:15
Fabulous... Nothing constructive to add...just loved it.
Bradene | December 4, 2008 - 12:18
Thank you Christajoyce, I'm happy you enjoyed my little piece of nonsense. Val :)
Nathan Bednarek | December 4, 2008 - 23:41
HAHA, that is beyond brilliant. The imagery is just perfect and the rhythm is infectious. This is a well deserved cherry- I'd give it two or even three cherries if it were up to me!
Well done, a very enjoyable read.
Nathan.