Interlocking Haiku of Truth


from the ABC set Experimental Works

See beyond the now
Watch new horizons approach
Welcome them with zest.

Open up your mind
Your heart will soon follow suit
Embracing chaos

Taming the chaos
Will chase away doubt and fear
Tranquillity flows.

Tangled lines of life
Will straighten out with reason
Peace and light will shine.

Love will bloom with truth
Knowledge grow, hate dissipate,
Life and light triumph.

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Comments

FTSE100 | November 9, 2008 - 12:57

I love your optimism Val. If you start a religion, may I be your first disciple? Let's hear it for light and life!

jennifer | November 9, 2008 - 19:08

All hail the priestess, for she has spoken.

I feel calmed and slightly humbled. Thank you.

Nathan Bednarek | November 9, 2008 - 23:00

Wow, it's like reading Psalms. It really has that spiritual feel to it- I can almost touch it. Great work, well done.

Nathan.

littleditty | November 10, 2008 - 12:14

energetic words
embrace this wonderful life
zesty haiku springs

fantastical Val xx

Bradene | November 11, 2008 - 14:32

Thanks Paul, all disciples very welcome. :) Val

Bradene | November 11, 2008 - 14:33

Nice I can make someone feel calm! It's a change for me I usually cause mayhem:) Val x

Bradene | November 11, 2008 - 14:34

Thanks Nathan what A nice comment that is. Val

Bradene | November 11, 2008 - 14:35

That's a great little haiku too LD. Glad you enjoyed Val x