It Doesn't Matter Which...


from the ABC set Life's Funny Little Foibles

Contempt, or is it paranoia?
Your contempt ?
My paranoia ?
It doesn’t matter which,
it’s there etching
like acid etches glass,

eating my ego
until I want to hide my eyes.

How did it happen?
When did your words
register on my retina?

Who are you anyway
with your wicked written wit?
More pertinently
why do I wallow in it?

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Comments

threeleafshamrock | January 10, 2009 - 13:29

A craftsman at work! You set the standard for all. Brilliant. If this is not cherry picked, there is no god.

Chris

Ewan | January 10, 2009 - 14:00

Hmmm.... think I'll go and read all the comments on your work now, Val. :-)

Bradene | January 14, 2009 - 11:35

Thanks Chris you are very knd. Val x

Bradene | January 14, 2009 - 11:36

OK Ewan, off you go then (o: Val