I wish I’d seen you one last time
I could at least have said goodbye
held you, told you that you were mine.
Here I am now well past my prime
yet when I dwell on you I cry,
I wish I’d seen you one last time
to print your image and refine
your angels face on my mind’s eye,
held you, told you that you were mine.
My Summer is in steep decline,
mulberry days are drawing nigh;
I wish I’d seen you one last time,
our spirits may yet intertwine
out from this mortal coil could I
Hold you, tell you that you are mine?
Death may not be our end of line;
together we may get to fly
yet, I wish I’d seen you one last time
Held you, told you that you were mine.

Comments
lenchenelf | February 13, 2009 - 11:23
Softly spoken, all the very best L
Silver Spun Sand | February 13, 2009 - 12:14
Your words are beautiful, bravely spoken. Mine would be superfluous.
Thank you for posting this.
Tina x
Bradene | February 13, 2009 - 14:33
Thanks L. Really appreciate you reading and commenting. Val x
Bradene | February 13, 2009 - 14:34
Tina, you are so sweet. Thanks for the lovely comment. Love. Val xx
shoebox | February 13, 2009 - 14:44
Skillfully & touchingly expressed. A treasure.
Bradene | February 13, 2009 - 15:12
Thank you shoebox. I value your opinion. Val x
luigi_pagano | February 13, 2009 - 16:26
Very moving, Val, and beatifully crafted.
xx
Bradene | February 13, 2009 - 16:39
Why Luigi! Thank you very much. Val x
Nathan Bednarek | February 14, 2009 - 13:44
Just beautiful. This is what I call a sad, yet reassuring poem- a hint of desperation, but one layered with hope. Amazing.
Well done.
Nathan.
Bradene | February 14, 2009 - 18:38
Thank you Nathan you are very Kind. Val x