The Retting Pond
draws me to it as
swallows swoop
to catch a diversity of insects
hovering or skimming across its iron brown surface.
Mallard and water hen
compete noisily for bread thrown
by chattering children
holidaying with harassed parents;
chivvying them on
anxious to be elsewhere.
Whilst I watch the water
wondering at it’s history
my imagination recreates the scene;
the retting,
women carrying the bundles of flax and hemp,
rough hands busily laying them in the pond for soaking;
the fleshy parts slowly disintegrating leaving the fibres.
Later, fibres will dry
to be woven into ropes from the hemp
and sailcloth from the flax.
The young among them
giggling and gossiping
as their older companions tut tut at their frivolity.
The sun beats gently at my skin
pleasantly warming me.
Subtle perfumes rise to tease my nose;
the greater mace reeds with it’s bull rush head,
willow herb, the sunshine yellow of the
creeping buttercup mingle among the marsh marigold.
Here and there a few late forget-me-not persist
around the skeletons of the flag iris and wild lupin.
Arrow head ferns standing sentinel over all;
providing cover for the shy water vole
and a hide for the noisy frogs.
Soon the woodcock, snipe and curlew
will pay their annual visit.
For now though a heron dives and surfaces
with an unfortunate fish glistening,
dripping sparkling droplets of water from his beak;
collard doves coo dolefully
from the surrounding trees.
A movement at my feet intrudes;
I look down to see a cheeky mallard
reminding me to feed him the bread I hold in my hand.

Comments
Silver Spun Sand | January 8, 2009 - 21:34
What a picture you paint, here, Val. Vivid, vibrant - so full of life and I love the ending. We have a small hollow in our garden that fills with rainwater. We call it our pond. The mallards usually dessert it at this time of the year for richer pickings elsewhere, but what with the ice and snow of late, they are frequenting our garden every day with its abundance of birdseed, etc. It is costing us a small fortune, but small price:-)
Much savoured. A beautiful poem.
Tina xx
Bradene | January 14, 2009 - 11:41
It was an easy thing to write Tina the spot to which I refer is particularly lovely, well to me anyway. We keep meaning to go back but never seem to get the time. Love Val x