Once they stood mocking her
in the pink bathroom,
silent, challenging.
She’d pretend indifference;
sometimes she fancied
she heard them whisper,
“come on then, step up .”
Often she obeyed,
they would snigger and groan
while she yelled, “liars!”
The bathroom is beige these days,
but still they stand watching, furtive;
daring her to ask them.
Only now she knows their reaction
would barely register;
their conclusion obvious
as the flesh loosens
and hangs about her bones.
A wry smile touches her pale lips
at such a cruel irony.

Comments
jennifer | November 9, 2008 - 19:12
As one who is currently nursing a cold with a bumper bag of doughnuts, this poem made me laugh and gulp.
I love how the bathroom colour almost reflects the health of the character, and the evil personification of the scales.
They all lie, lest we lie to ourselves.
I think you could even make them more evil!
Bradene | November 11, 2008 - 14:38
Maybe I will have a go at that some time soon. Thanks for the comments. Love Val x