In the shadows
he collects
creamy thighs,
long white necks.
Then a token
to remember
how it felt
to dismember
all those gory
artifacts
for others to find
in woodland tracts.
A silver ring
a piece of lace,
with each small thing
his pulses race.
He takes great pride
in his collection
and hopes he may
avoid detection...
Comments
MistakenMagic | November 23, 2010 - 12:37
Gritty and sinister - but absolutely enthralling! A great read , well done!
Magic xxx
Bradene | November 23, 2010 - 12:45
Thanks Magic. Nice to hear from you. Valx
Highhat | November 23, 2010 - 12:45
Yes sinister. I may have him under suspicion of being a pervert. Hmm sorry well written
Pia ;)
Bradene | November 23, 2010 - 12:47
Lol.Thanks Pia, I've one or two more of this nature hanging around, all written for Challenges. Valx
Silver Spun Sand | November 23, 2010 - 13:04
Grizzly, to say the least;-) Nice one, Val!
Tina x
Bradene | November 23, 2010 - 13:08
wait till you read tomorrows (-; Happy you liked it thanks for reading Valx
fatboy74 | November 23, 2010 - 18:14
Really well crafted Val - each word seems a definite choice which makes it all sit together so well. Fab. :-)
tcook | November 24, 2010 - 12:47
And really good to have you back and on such fine form!
Bradene | November 25, 2010 - 12:42
Thanks Fatboy, I'm so thrilled you found it to your liking. Again thanks for reading. Val
Bradene | November 25, 2010 - 12:43
Nice to hear from you Tony. I'm glad you liked this enough to comment. Love Valx