Street Of Bones

NEW Bradene
like this neat complete so fewer
lines. Still to-day loosing love
ones so young aren't we sombodies
darlings?
julie cavalcader x (:-

I imagine the cries, the screams,
the whispered prayers,

Wow nice stuff.
Very emotive

was my fave :)

'whose bones lie
huddled'

- what an original image! Never thought of bones huddling before!

Magic xxx

I really enjoyed this bradene - it reminds me of a piece of music

Thanks Julie, you are right of course too many are still dying and for what? they are always someone's darlings too. Thanks for your comments. Val x

Glad you liked this Pinda. Val x

Thanks Pom. Appreciated. Val x

Thanks for commenting Magic.
These bones weren't just placed nicely, they stayed where they fell, thousands upon thousands of them, some say the street is a mile long. Valx

Thanks very much that is a lovely compliment. Val x

Reading your tribute to those who died in this quagmire, this tragic battle - countless lives lost to gain so little, made me go cold, Val.

Stark words and a poem well written, but far better, of course, if words such as these had no cause ever to be uttered.

Very well done.

Tina xx

Thanks Tina, I appreciate your words and agree wholeheartedly with... "but far better, of course, if words such as these had no cause ever to be uttered."

and still the killing goes on. Val x

Nice one Val. War/battles never guarantee anything but the dead (bones). I'm sure they huddle together asking; 'Why are we here?'.

Good work!

Chris XX

Thanks Chris glad you liked this one. Val x