Three Than-Bauk

Posted by Bradene on October 7, 2008 - 11:22
from the ABC set Experimental Works

Harvest set fair,
golden pear hangs
right there to pluck.

Sunlight in rays,
dancing, plays on
inlays of glass.

A word in jest
can infest the
mind, lest smiling.

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Dearest Val,as you are more than aware, I know from wretched experience, how damned difficult to write these blighters are!!

You have done a really good job here, and produced a fine poem to boot. Well done! By George, I think she's got it!

Tina :-)x

Thanks Tina, I love experimenting. Val x