Three Little Bites


from the ABC set Experimental Works

Yielding

Weary,
yielding slowly
the night closes my eyes,
leaden lids fall soft, inviting
a dream.

~~

Mixed Emotions

Crying
Out my sorrow
Wringing hands in fear, yet
Emerging with heart pounding and
Raging.

~~

Cold Spell

Grey layered the skies.
A blanket of cold comfort
To the warm hearted

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Comments

Silver Spun Sand | October 25, 2008 - 12:38

I loved this, Val especially 'Cold Spell'

"Grey layered, the skies.
A blanket of cold comfort
To the warm hearted."

Beautifully put.

Tina x

Bradene | October 25, 2008 - 18:34

I'm quite fond of haiku if they turn out right. They can be awkward to get right sometimes, it's just a matter of trying to get the right feel to them. Val x