You're prettier with a membrane, darling.


from the ABC set Nonsense

It's our skin
That keeps us in,
Without it we'd be sore.

We would dry
And quickly die.
Now that would be a bore.

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Comments

insertponceyfre... | April 14, 2010 - 15:26

brilliant title! loved the poem too, obviously

Silver Spun Sand | April 14, 2010 - 15:29

Less is often more, as in this case. Made me smile, and I too admire the title which works well as an integral part of the poem itself.

Tina

maggyvaneijk | April 14, 2010 - 21:12

Love the playful simplicity.