Bleed,
Bleed dry,
Bleed and die,
Bleed and suffer,
Bleed and cry,
Bleed now,
Curse
Curse,
Curse me,
Curse me now,
Curse me to Hell,
Curse your son,
Curse him,
Die.
Die,
Die now,
Die and leave,
Die and be done,
Die forever,
Fight.
Fight,
Fight it,
Fight the heat,
Fight til the end,
Fight while you bleed,
Fight while you Curse me,
Fight while you die by me,
Fight while I laugh now,
Fight while I joke,
Fight til death,
Fight now,
Bleed.
Comments
Caolan_le_Paddy | April 16, 2008 - 11:34
Author Note*
I did notice in the last verse I have 2 lines with 4 syllables but oh well.
Sooz006 | April 16, 2008 - 18:22
Like this one even more than the last. If I'd written it I'd replace the fight verse with the die one. Die is final and I think it would read better at the end.
Caolan_le_Paddy | April 16, 2008 - 18:41
Thanks I'll keep that in mind for the next.