A Bird in the Sky


from the ABC set Poetry

Soaring through grim waves
and concrete tower blocks,
dancing in the pristine light,
of cold winter’s glare.
While a notion of stamping feet
rushes on the ground,
a busy anywhere hum
with a meaning that escapes me.
But higher than that,
than all of it,
still dipping in the wind,
carving the breeze, with a deft precision,
like a bow turning in the sky,
the shadow of a sharpened tail
diving in and out of reason.
And the faded colour of nameless faces
and the wordless drone of stuck-together sound
melts, into a vacuum silence,
of pristine quality.
As the long wings whip elegantly,
against a crystal blue screen,
tracing lines of the most beautiful poetry
in the still and breathless air,
and glide playfully through
monuments of awkward jutting grey,
teasing the uneasy canvas of each sullen brick,
whose heads seem to bow,
to an unspoken recognition.
And in the hollow glass stillness
of the earth’s frozen breath,
the world turns.

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Comments

littleditty | November 30, 2007 - 22:07

enjoyed this a lot - these lines especially

the shadow of a sharpened tail
diving in and out of reason.

teasing the uneasy canvas of each sullen brick

super! --->off to read your other post xxldx

capoeiragem | December 1, 2007 - 15:19

thank littleditty-wrote this one quite a while ago and wasn't sure if it perhaps came across as a little naive technically so im glad you enjoyed it-thanks again for your comments! x