Breakfast Haiku


from the ABC set Poetry

Chopped bananas and
frozen açaí berries,
melting in the sink.

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Comments

kim.rooney | February 7, 2008 - 15:18

I'm not good at Haikus, or chopping fruit. Breakfast this morning was a banana mush- disappointing and not at all reviving like this Haiku and its clean tingling image.

littleditty | February 7, 2008 - 22:40

lol - vitamin C in abundance - delicious and visual

capoeiragem | February 8, 2008 - 17:11

lol it certainly seems to do the trick after a late night...

Thanks for the comment littleditty, glad you liked it.

capoeiragem | February 8, 2008 - 18:48

Glad you enjoyed it Kim, I must admit Haikus are not normally my speciality either so I appreciate your comment. 'Clean tingling image', I like that, thanks!

Oh, and I hope today's breakfast was a little more satisfying than yesterday's! lol