Oh wouldst thou be mine forever?
From dawns first light ‘til darkness falls
Be but my love and I’ll ask no more of thee
Thou art more fair than heavens angels
More soft than winters snow
My heart beats the melody of thy name
My eyes seek thy face and would be happy to see nothing else
Oh wouldst thou be mine for just one day?
One moment with thy beautiful soul
Would last eternally
My love
My all
Wouldst thou give your heart to me?
Wouldst thou take my own?
Oh tender one!
My world I give to you
My word
Oh wouldst thou love, my love?
Love to be loved
To Love
I ask no more from thee
Let me love you.
Comments
Cavalcaderl | August 14, 2009 - 20:00
new cassiopeia
This is really heart
warming poem.anyone's dream.
Like the verses etc:
Thou art more fair
than heaven's angels
more soft than winter snaow
OH!
Wouldst thou be mine for
just one day?
One moment with thy beautiful
soul
would last eternally
My Love
My all!
Oh!
wouldst thou love, my love
love to be loved
to love.
julie cavalcader
hilary west | August 14, 2009 - 21:26
This goes like a dream. Very nice !!!
threeleafshamrock | August 15, 2009 - 08:31
'More soft then winters snow...' than?
'Wouldst thou take my own?'...mine?
I like this. Have incorporated this 'Olde English' myself at times for effect. It is very readable and enforces the message (for me). Well done!
Chris ;)