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Old Stripy

Posted by catherine poarch on May 19, 2011 - 18:52
from the ABC set Inside Elephant

Here
in the
rivergreen
leafsoft
brushgold
longmeadow
seedblown
bugclicking
snakegrassy
monkeytemple world,
lies
Old Stripy:
kohl-eyed
limb-easy
power-yawning
stretch-rolling
smug-whiskered
glint-minded,
deceptively lazy
shadowking
cat.

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Comments

Highhat | May 20, 2011 - 05:56

This must be somewhere in Africa?- what beautiful imagery and good structure

;)Pia

seashore | May 20, 2011 - 07:48

I like this a lot.

Mangone | May 20, 2011 - 14:10

I liked this also.
Shouldn’t think Africa has Monkey Temples, Pia…
more likely Thailand or India.
Both have tigers too.

Highhat | May 20, 2011 - 15:18

Oh yes- Mangone you're probably right. I just read another one with Zebras so I thought. . . by the same poet.
;)Pia