"GREEN EYES" Updated now. Now in Magazine 23 Wow! 954 readings Added now Jan 2011.

What a clear, warm voice you have in this piece, a nice observation of human and cat behaviour :-) Thank you for sharing it,all the best, Lena

Yes, Green Eyes is a nice poem. Cats help you relax with their antics, and you portray its personality very well. All the best! Richard LP

Richard L.Prov..thankyou comment this is true any names I have permission to use, I am new at all this.
julie. love to read others works.

Keep writing, you have eyes that see, and a heart that cares through your writing. Richard LP

Ichard L.Prov Just been reasding Foot prints"me a Priest for 7 years ine everthing I say do and speak? it was a church Homeless, what a wonedrful comment end may 1st group writing hove sussex.and all other groups re Cat poem was put on film Odeon what all do dancing,singing,acting ages 17 90. and we got Oscars, X star from The Bill was host, I bought Cat mask no one knows what is behind a mask? do they God got me recite hence Cat poem. but all this difficult .,//? I just entered comp. not knowing, all these in 31 File so I put them on, prayed comment 3. now toal 2715. my goodness. I give a little line comment back. Your absolutely my life.Iv!e just read you Prayer for to-day I will pray for you and your family.we have one daughter m 37?yearsand in all circumstances and beyond, Priest cared and done for me. God Bless+I miss him I had him 7 years. Hubby capt snooker team.God Bless take care. one poem in The big issue new co-ordinator came very young and got my" Atmosphere "in within 2 weeks. within 2 weeks, awaiting argus print Green Eyes. yes I can now feel depth poems and stories. I could do nothing.?thanks million keep up good work novels etc. do get another cat.Julie xI 70 UGH HE IS 60gOD bLESS

new This is now going in the Argus Friday. True
Pyschology Cat Purrs like my poem "
"Green Eyes"magic
julie.

Richard L. Provencher

How well you've captured this creature .
I can see almost see him making his way to the doctors waiting room to continue his vocation in life .
Great work .
mcscraic

New Nolan well seem like giving me feed backs good.can't always explain what mean, so pick out lines.
why real and birthday I was
bought a t shirt? duaghter and son in law. what with
Cat and big green eyes re; poem
and large white nose.I also recited
this on film writing groups we did, wearing cat mask
very difficult. Mcsraig done lovely one on Cat great.
julie x cavalcader (:-

Jazz is a good name for a black cat with green eyes. He can only be true &&

new mcscraig
True
"Green Eyes" Cat Poem is faithful
"Jazz "and I always tell him
beautiful cat,neighbour's never used to stroke, whisper
heal, even if not well I open door
there he his sitting waiting
his little paw lifts if I tickle
him softly, behind ear, or on top head gently,
how many times in life, do we all need hugs, kisses
relaxing, all stroke him. meows back to me.But I had
church where kiss of peace, and hug was given then,that is healing thing to. Iv'e done one on "Relaxation" because done it, and cd.tranquil music and had in past.
julie x (:-

New Mcscraig
Hope your well
not seen any work here
greatly yours good.
maybe your doing children's story
comp; your so good at
julie x cavalcader (:-

Sounds like you like this cat.

new Nolan
University has proved now cat's cries
like a baby in a way mean,all things.
Yes, he is special not mine.I have seen him to-day,I called his name I got three cries.Tell him he is beautiful and I haven't seen you.etc;No not barmy facts.Once I wore cat mask and tail,and read it difficult bristles whiskers etc;Think said writing day centre all tried somethings,and put on film etc;
It was so large screen embarrassing to see us all.
given plastic oscars and certificates,thrilled all had etc; Lots things happened since I talked to him.Friend of mine picked him up.cuddled once,hear it purring!
Have you read "Green Eyes" oh! I think you did.
It's for him.Hoping Friday if walking well!Go to
do and read it out from my copy, among other ones.As did recently at talent town.The judge liked it to.
Must read yours,and others.I am not a poet though.
Thankyou.
julie x

Jealousy is an ugly thing don’t worry about your cat it won’t run away. Must admit ‘though this business is quite confusing all-in-all. Must be your age.

Hold on! &&

new Nolan
thankyou comments,I am not jealous
of anything or anyone.So why is it confusing
it's all true.It's not our cat.I made poem up!
and of course ask permission of the owner if
I read it somewhere,or printed in paper of poet's corner.or maybe the Big issue then.Yes I am not
that young,but it's what one does now with life!
The only thing that's run a way is the "Wheelie Bin"
so made funny poem about it now on here!
Asking for comments and happenings to them is going well!
thanks.
Julie

All the best! I enjoy reading your stuff thanks! &&

Very simply and sweet and from the heart, words do not always matter if we write what makes us happy, I don't think we care too much what others think but it is nice when it also touches someone else too.

new Nolan
Tah! ever so some mine are
ridiculous,to the sublime.
I am gobsmacked you and anyone like!
I never use to use preview button,or
in a hurry!his computer work be jumbled.
But I enjoy reading yours of course too
and all other's.Sometimes we have to suffer
but as Editor T.Cook Abctales Tony would say
bring out the juices,let them flow.
julie.x

new Jackneally
Thankyou good comment.
I do agree with you.if
I can't get it in poetic form.
But I am just amazed?To get One reading and comment.
I am reading yours to.and all.
julie x cavalcader (:-

new Calcabaderl
True and updated.Free ryme.No news good news.Alive
and kicking.Peanut butter black cat
best.Jet Jungle black belt.funakushi.Crocs
for breakfast!Woke up sommat in
bed-broken specs.sleep
over it.fixed for
now.Infantry
improvised.Weelie bins
for weelies
please.
Present under tree?Too many
books.
Brewing
in pot.
No Hon no mon.No fun.Mobile bye!bye!No girl no cry
nogo nogo no no!Cabby too no gogo.
No sleep.No eat.
No abc.No!no!
No!
Fun,fun,fun!and the mama took the tv away.
Lbw bad luck.cheers
nolan &&

new Nolan
Thankyou but not quite sure of it
can you have another go go sometime please.
Julie x cavalcader (:- No L cavalcader mistake.By me.pressed wrong key.tired.

Thank you Lena this is perfectly true plus much much more happened a week ago, concerning Odeon Cinema and the writing group and others put on there, what we do. I had Publishing co. but paid all time. I am not poet or an Author, so I had done at least 2O stories, I tried and poems, as O.A.P to expensive keep up Pub; co. I only did 3. and on web. But groups we do Homeless, and books free all in maybe painting drawing acting dancing. Yes I returned wig? then saw Cat? mask. Recited Green Eyes young film men come and all shown May 23rd. In all adversity I get leaded by God. Love reading others works. and we have a host one year Joe Mangle x Neighbours then.and last year Chris Ellis X The Bill can't great person believe it's finishing now nice people meet and gave out all of us plastic oscars and certificates, very scary such huge screen. Last year I got one best reader? what an achievement. Im reading others works,amazing what was done by all.Young and old.

Sweet!!

New Noaln
Hi! I said to "Green Eyes" the other day Jazz
do come on the other wall,so I can get a full
photo of you,by the daffoldils,y goodness he did.
And a photo with both eyes looking at me.
I would like this to come top,where and when ever I am aloud to read it.
julie x

When you take a photo with a flash, say indoors. Why is it that a human's eyes come out red, and a dog's eyes come out green?

Green eyes is not my story.

new Jacknealy
Thankyou comment,I was only answering
a subject on your's I think
julie x

My guess is it's the different lenses like the focal distance- refraction index and density of the (?) material itself and the cornea too. Must be.

The retina must play a role also. Is it a coincidence that dogs are colour blind (black & white only) and mostly humans not?

What determines the colour in the first place? That flash photo of your hubby. Look see it’s dead-centre it’s the pupil it’s not black it’s blood red! Like a devil almost. Does it happen only when you look straight at the camera? These red eyes are scary makes me think of vampires.

The question pops instantly! Experiment more with your flash out on your cat! Let's see if it's a "true green" (Maybe you don't even have a cat? Do you have a hamster? I mean you're sitting with sub-zero most of the year. Can a cat survive?) A cat has double eyelids have you noticed?

I don’t enjoy blue eyes myself. Phoney like popped an acid. Two sparrows cuddling together huffed up against the biting wind. That is beautiful like “of the earth”.

Yes I enjoy your company cheers Julie! &&

new calcabederl
PC uptotrix
ghost-in-the–machine.
cigies down 80%
Movies catching
up 20 years.
Beautiful.Minimal violence etc.Ladyhawk lovely
Ladylove loveliness.Falls from tower
down cliff. screams turn to hawks cries.Brilliant
Oldfashioned well ended
Good solid stuff
Constructions here now. breaking through walls etc big
hHmmer pick up momentum in the swing.point of
impact maximum velocity.Timing.
Grandladylove more than
Jellytots
Nolan

new Nolan
your so clever most is right I think.
But I know a cat has extra long distance sight etc;to see in the dark. No I don't go in for
anything in the vampires.No we don't have a cat.
Quite a few hear areas,but bit of siamese in it,
eyes always amber,but I like "Green Eyes" title
as it stands out.I am so pleased the local paper
Easter Monday, has printed my Oh! wheelie Bin. true.
free.no,if I press wrong buttons on his camera not such a clear photo.found comment re-I asked,
I see on here! "Green Eyes"
iT WAS A Joanna Lumley T.V. PROGRAMME
said,Cats have extra long vision seeing at night.
Don't catch all you have said.Sorry.
What tower it was high cliff.
Sounds like "Rapunzel Rapunzel"
Let down your long hair poem.
What Green Eye do you mean or want.
julie

new Nolan
Been out fresh air,and beauty nature.Have to get out I think when the flash get's in,or I have been told daughter dog's eyes different chemicals,not sure about that.But "Green Eyes" is really Amber eyes like Title Green Eyes.Tired walking.Taken some photos.Someone on ABCtales said carry camera all time.So borrowed his!sorry,don't quite undertsand
rhyming lines.No need what ever to opologise,all
I put absolutely true any of mine.But some authors
so good,poems and stories,can't always tell.
julie

Jazz is a special cat indeed, Julie, and has obviously taken to you and your home. Very good and so pleased to see you have had excellent readership and reviews for this. Much enjoyed.

sue

new Sue dinum
Wow! Thankyou so much.
Lovely comment, he has just been outside,
I call running, came in looks around,and in
bedroom nods of on divan, on computer loud! miaow!
Beside me on the table sitting in front of computer,
think trying stop me typing! Or learning Abc like poem says, can't settle long, looks up at the door, be let out, on a blasting blowing wind, waiting his
master's car re-turning. Well I didn't think make the
magazine ever, far too long as added to it from year
first typed it. Well AbcTales states everyone has a story! Jazz joined in with all of us, in photos, even
birthday came two days later, so got daughter's card,
as he sat on (mine) his lap card said Mother ugh! love mum better, that's first time. Names? been lucky on horses etc. But you say done nothing interesting, you have given talent for story writing. Love Schubert The Cat. Seemed so true!
Manx cat's with no tail what a noise they make, when
small jumped out hedge. I must have over 50 snaps of him. But both getting old. I think forget but comes.
Milk is bad for them I hear. Love and attention! but
truly amazing cat. Oh! mu goodness there's a cry! looked two! cat's got him in, don't know who started it? Sound like a baby for help! I could see a Film
made of your's you know, whether fantasy or not!
This one one cry! one jump in between flowers.
Well I'm an old eccentric. But manage all this. he he! in all adversities. Life is never a bowl of cherries! is it. If can help, or say right thing be happy helps me.
I didn't even have an imagination! or sleep! thats enough! Another story never tell!
julie xx

Hi Julie, I've only just read your response to my comment, I didn't know, I never got email. Just wanted to say congratulations for your inclusion in the magazine, would have said it before - very well done indeed! You deserve it.

Best wishes.

sue

new sue dinum (long) letter NEWSY.
Hello! Wow! Thanks so much, to kind
been typing and adding since it was 1st
typed on, now added it is is AbcTales 23
not sure! If can should have done that,
all perfectly true! last three day's owner
heard wa away, shop mentioned to me, owing to
cries of cat fight, took him in, my word chair
was full up, three massive "Allo "Allo cries, jumped
right up in front computer, sure trying tell me, owner was away! now back have lots photos just for us.Took one outside shop, would you like, no got their own, quite amazed, not jealousy, but cat loves to chat in his cat cries, as I give hime love and affection, like him go where please,loves hide behind curtains look out window, shift all,and run
into bedroom lay curled on his duvet.Again call his name. "Jazz" Green eyes and he appears, playing hide-n-seek. Had put him out at night. Mine won't let him stay! But I would nnever talk him at one time!
Your Schubert the cat, would make a good film. I did
wear cat mask and plus a tail, for day centre, we all
did once, omg what! an achievement, but Editor t.cook
wanted reader's dare I reply,name came up something like "Cacklecader" had too laugh, definitley not me,asked by email it was. I did and read "The Wheatsheaf" 1st time. Magazine Edited by "John Wilks"
I couldn't believe! email,April and Editor t.cook (Tony)Give all permission to agree. Also my "Six Pennorth Of Chips" re-my pop, died, bit of hectic family life. Editor t.cook (Tony) helped so much, and advised. And "Green Eyes". too poem.2009 I used hate comments,how to answer in correct terms. Or maybe never answered couldn't some.
I don;t like way huge heading mine now, how it's come out?No not sent email to you, busy,most on here,
"Virgin" been off here, few days possible emails sent, not got through to who! One was The big issue, great news, I buy and staff day centre, put in and all.
Switched on t.v not knowing one, he does pastel paintings,great and a "Bengal Tiger" wanted one on T shirt. I did. okd not done yet!
There he was on t.v. news now someone I forgotten,name promoting his art great works, history of bad life!
and photo and story on news t.v. of HIS paintings, amazingly chalks done, I have seen too great gone into exhibition and Chichester too think, from times in prison couldn't sleep! other things, took chalks etc; and did.
No! reply could be be in next issue, or "Virgin" cut off! so I have seen him, congratulated him,and photoed his permission, attached all sent "The Big Issue" like they do. Hoping see him in, his uniform well new, waistcoat and ID badge. Big Issue soon.
Thanks like your stories.
Have good day. What do they say, life is what you make it, but some make it for you, load hiccups in!
take care "Jazz" group six quartet was fab:
Corrected spelling and diction getting dark then.
You and all so kind.
cavalcaderl julie xx