"BEEME"

*** Beeme could be a Sun-beam
or maybe a smiley face
or friend writes good Poetry

sweet sixteen um is very young
the world's before you ee-by=gum
such talent of poems and stories

when a cherry is picked she will
be in her glory!

you paint your Abctales
of red white and blue
rosey ones sad ones
happy and mystery too

I wonder if your hair is blonde
dark or redhead
and paint your nails with
the stars on and also the moon!
julie cavalcader x (:-

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Comments

Cavalcaderl | August 10, 2009 - 18:38

New Beeme if you do not like
this let me know I will delete
it ok.my mind is thinking.
julie x (:-

Beeme | August 10, 2009 - 19:52

I love the poem Julie. Thank you very much, I'm flattered! :-) ;-) It is very kind of you to write this for me, cheered me up today! You're an amazing poet Julie, please believe this x

Beeme xx

Cavalcaderl | August 11, 2009 - 07:37

Beeme well it's only a start!
so alter or change just as you
like or add to it re-do and make
it more exciting go on!
julie xx (:-

Beeme | August 11, 2009 - 21:05

I have uploaded my version x

Cavalcaderl | August 12, 2009 - 18:05

BEEME your is great August 12th 2009
Iv'e switched name around credit to you
of ours not sure which
one I mean blankety mind
up am .loo!
"BEEME" RE:
"MY CHERIE L'AMOUR"
for you.
julie xx (:-
surprise surprise!
re: spelt now wrong!

Nolan | March 20, 2010 - 18:46

@ :-)