CONCERT

I'm going to a concert to-day
where big brass bands play
numbers such as "Fly me to the moon"
and "Every time that you walk in the room"

There's the theme from "Vienna waltz
and pops songs of our choice
the violins cellos flutes and harp
all blend in with different parts

there's a small square corner some
get up and do the rumba
I love Cha Cha Cha Jive and Can Can see
my dress flares out up to my knees

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Silver Spun Sand | June 23, 2009 - 22:40

I can picture The Searchers now, Julie, singing that song:-

"I can hear the guitars playing lovely tunes
every time that you walk in the room.
Close my eyes for a second...pretend it's me you want, meanwhile I try to act so nonchalant..."

Those were the days, eh?

Really enjoyed your poem and the last line was a fantastic finale;-)

Tina x

Cavalcaderl | July 15, 2009 - 21:47

new Hello! -;) *** Silver-Spun-Sand thankyou comments just trying to put it to-gether comments keep coming please!. One says good but I have a Child like effect not sure what they mean. Abctales t.Cook says mind me stating remember some of us have dreams? and go easy on all, well some of us very? very ?lucky to put them to-gether at all plus cannot stay to long on computers other things to do. hope your ok I'm cutting my long comments down hurray! One day I remember how to work it all another day I get forgetful. whoops-a daisy? Especially hubby keeps interrupting before goes out. Some or most brilliant on here scary pages of Cherries! to compete is that the word and all stanzas, commas,exclamation and speech marks? But great since this damn computer now set IN Front of me? Not bad 3 readings wow1 only month figures into 4 now and ow!!!!!!cherry I'm thrilled "cherry pickers" read and gentle comments.keep them coming what ever.
julie x Poem "Summer" mine writing group in "The Big Issue". Monday as promised by new project worker.
"Green Eyes" not in "Argus" yet and email Oh" "Brighton By The Sea"yet weeks passing now sometimes they put one in for me?
julie x ah! Magic porch box Interflora Roses just one of many years, and clothes set! hubby I got him shirts far to small ugh! bought flowers I did then on doorstep surprise daughter away and son-in-law few days. Box interflora wow not taken in. Then we have a magic? garden £5 note once. and Jacket and jumper new carrier bags, discreet another year xmas huge bottle scent but I can't smell! and shaving lotion hubby.god works amazing things.
julie x