Dancing Puddles True

Dancing puddles what a sight
I had to jump in and out down
the street
with the wrong shoes on my feet

My £1 umbrella I came out the shop
had to press and shoot the button
to open
the bloody thing stuck!
designed with exotic butterflies on.

I already have one with
'Audrey Hepburn' to

The rain and delug'e and dirt
coming down the drain
When a car comes whooshing!
round the corner one is splashed
all over

Children are wearing macs and wellingtons
with pictures of 'Winnie the Pooh'
and the mum's have the same design
they look really cool

Iv'e seen a plastic yellow duck
tied on top of a car roof
very predominant sitting there
I laughed! and laughed!
maybe the current flowed to fast

I'd like an umbrella with
cherubs and angels on
or turn the handle
Hey! presto plays a song

Or cherries and Abctales
Happy sad good and bad

Educational imaginary and
comedy spooky things
just fulfilling and happenings
of people's dreams!

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Comments

Silver Spun Sand | November 16, 2009 - 22:17

Oh, Julie - you have worked hard on this one, I can see.

Jumping and dancing in puddles - everyone's childhood memory.

I love your last stanza by the way:-

"Educational imaginary and
comedy spooky things
just fulfilling and happenings
of people's dreams!"

Tina;-)x

Cavalcaderl | December 21, 2009 - 21:25

New Silver-spun-sand
Gee thanks comment true!
julie