DUSTY PINK (IP) 60 words

You are really developing, this is showing a lot of promise. although your final two lines would be better in a comment box - they confused me at first because I thought they were part of the poem!

J x

Fun poem - I liked it! :-)

A good effort, Julie. You are on the right lines.
It isn't all that difficult when you put your mind to it.

Luigi xx

New Jennifer,
Thankyou altered
I have to share computer with hubby.
Had poem all scribbled down, not pleased
had to cut out over 60 the 60 words too many.
T.V is on for Ray, so not easy thinking?
Thankyou all you help. I can't do a collection
either. Just had lovely email, from first time
AbcTales asking help on their poem, I have tried,
but said I am not poet, up to maybe one of top author's help? But liked one of mine so much .I get confused to if not time, quietness to do all. I am visiting we are sick friend. We have no car.Bus and walk. I can't leave
person friend like they are, from our singing groups, and day centre's I have deleted now, is that better? Thankyou.
Like reading your's expert and all other's.
all the best
julie xx

New Luig_Pagano
Thankyou for lovely comment.
What mind, I did't have one.
This was true, but what scribbled
got home whacked out, if walk hour's
journey. No time at cash counter, try
again larger ones. But now poem treid,
more interseting, worked out to many word's.
So cutting and cutting it down. No so good
sense wise!
Well done, on your (IP)
julie xx

New Canary Islander
OOH! ooh, thankyou
60 words to make sense
quite hard. But it's a challenge.
keep writing. I had 40 words too many
on count up, at first, so not so good
now?
julie xx

new Luig_pagano
Hi! I had to hold onto shoe rail, balance on one
foot ah! as seat to low back, problem long ago, and slip on one shoe tickets inside, ouch one foot ok. Long long Queue think spelt wrong, I amdired girl's red hair bow, I said, but had to scribble out over 60 words, handed shoes to pay, my surprise one 7 one 8. Ugh! she said and laughed called staff to change, nothing only bigger size, no time try! so just took home. Matched pink of charity suede short jacket, had
everything under £2. wow1
Have as good weekend.Keep writing.
Julie xx

A very enjoyable slice of life.

David xx :--)

New kheldar
Thank's David, what a day it was?
Its eems now with clothes not what
the size says too, if don't try it
on get home hanger is one size thinl
I have gained weight, no good. size
was incorrect on the hanger, check with
label inside musch smaller, get mad.
Hve to go back, always exchange things
for me.
julie xx

Well done Julie! 60 + 3.

What is "dusty pink"? Is it like a baby? I thought that was baby pink. They tell me they start out as purple? And they scream a lot. Scary. Understandable, if they know what they're in for.

Could be that powder stuff? The stuff women puff on their faces when they try to be pretty.

Perhaps should've been "dusky" pink? Sounds romantic don't you think?

= 63 (?)

New Nolan
Thankyou comment,
Jennifer likes, helped me to remove comments on end
as made it look like poem. Did it in 5 minutes, you can tell counted up, cut a lot out.
Well I nearly gave up, 3rd dictionary I have found in the Oxford Thesaurus. 2nd hand from a market. Mine got me. I thought I heard words Dusty Pink long
time ago, or saying. But found it means= a dusty pink greyish,muted, dull pale. Dusty that part is grime and dirt, or powdery chalk.
It is not shocking! Pink that means Loud in colour/
Not a pastel pink, or an ice-cream pink. Neither "Dusty Springfiled" I loved her songs.
It can be a healthy pink skin colour.
Reddish pink, I don't think so.
Course babies can be pink, when born or pale, or blueish, usually hung tipped upside down, I believe
bring blood circulation. And will scream coming out into the world all the noises when born. etc;
Enjoyed the Questions. Thankyou what is 60 + 3?
julie x.

I enjoyed, another fun and well put together poem :)

Beeme xx

new Beeme
thankyou, it happened and was
true, but after scribbling quick, bit more did the
count far too many, so cut quite a bit out.
Would have been better, made sense more.
Enjoy all of your's too.
good to hear from you, hope all is well.
Most mine true, or therapy poem's, like
MistakenMagic say's too.
take care.
julie xx

ScoZen
Hello Julie
Very funny in just reading your replies to others.
I think all of above could be posted as a little story.

"...Course babies can be pink, when born or pale, or blueish, usually hung tipped upside down, I believe..."

"...size was incorrect on the hanger, check with
label inside musch smaller, get mad..."
Great.

New ScoZen
Hello! just seen your comment.
Nice get on an old poem,tried.
Do you mean the poem, I will take
on board kindly what you have suggested.
But may not be so easy to do. Will see.
Thanks. Babies always turned upside down
maybe gentle smack on bottom. Get oxygen
and blood working I think.Going back though.
Or do you mean my comments back,I am more of
an agony aunt.All comes from the heart mainly
surprised what I put sometimes.
good have you join AbcTales lot's help,even from
our Editor t.cook can't do punctuation well.
Happy new year.
julie x