HONEY BABE Updated

Oh! Honey babe
let down your auburn hair
don't worry about what to wear

Put your arms around me
give me a bear hug
but not to tight

Grab our coats
and you your pipe
go out to-night

We could go for a stroll
hold each other's hands
look for the twinkling stars
lingering with a kiss

Wipe away the tears
forgive and forget
all the misgivings
of many years

Each day is a new day
that can glow like the sun
if we moan
it passes on

I would end up having a giggle
we could even play
piggy in the middle

So shine like a cherry does
your cheeks will be rosey
with love
with love
I will keep dreaming

Things can change in lot's
of ways

Look at a dog
his coat goes mangy
It's eyes are droopy
If it is not taken out

Can be angry and aggressive
needs cuddles and loves

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Comments

skinner_jennifer | August 12, 2010 - 08:57

Hi Julie,
Lovely sweet poem. you have such a way with words.
Jenny.

Nolan | August 12, 2010 - 09:05

"Don't worry about what to wear".
Just wear a smile! Julie keep well!
&&

skinner_jennifer | August 12, 2010 - 11:34

Hi Julie,
My son is 37, he is still not right, he is on
valium at the moment to kill the pain, I just hope
he gets better soon. Trouble is, when you get a back
problem, it's hard to shift, I know because I have
had sciatica for 3 years, it's very painful, but
luckily it comes and goes.

I know what you mean about men and shopping, my
partner hates shopping, but I prefer to shop on my
own anyway. He always picks me up in the car
afterwards.

Anyway you take care, have a good weekend.
Jenny.

kheldar | August 13, 2010 - 20:25

Hi Julie,

Keep shining and keep on dreaming, and keep on plying us with your wonderful writing.

David xxx :--)

Cavalcaderl | August 13, 2010 - 21:25

new Nolan
Thanks lovely, I know if you walk down road crying,
get no where. Smile hides a million loves songs baby
and hear I am, catching too.
bless you
julie xx

jleehamil81 | August 14, 2010 - 17:44

wonderful words and imagery..you certaintly have a wonderful gift...your poetry inspired me to try my hand at a poem...but i dont think its very good...its almost child like, like something you would write in grade school...maybe i should stick to short stories and leave the poems to you :)

celticman | August 15, 2010 - 19:59

sometime five minutes is all you need. Well done!

Cavalcaderl | August 16, 2010 - 11:08

new Kheldar
David Hello!
Thankyou
sorry pressed wrong button
julie x

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Cavalcaderl | August 16, 2010 - 11:10

new skinner-jennifer
Hi! Jenny thanks good job you have a car.
But may I say as I know about all these
things, that Valium i know as a antdepressant,
you need strong pain killer Coparacodeamal think spelt wrong or whatever.
some times a cream, must all get from Dr. If chemist
and on other things, check Chemist or Dr. Is that any help. yep, my back goes long as I don't do what can't carrying gardening, and sit high seats not low.
But like most creams and tablets minium side effects,
cut down after a while. There is Difflam I had again Ggp must prescibe, Dr, it kind of numbs it a little while, nothing must be given to any one else.
julie x

Beeme | August 17, 2010 - 07:59

Hi Julie, sorry I'm late again. I have been catching up with most abctaler's this week :) This is a lovely poem, I really admire its sentiment.

Beeme xx

Cavalcaderl | August 19, 2010 - 08:12

new Beeme
Thankyou, lovely comment,
afraid it's a dream, that is
what I like most to connect,
with mine, very awkward personalities,
as getting on now. But a lot
can't give hugs and kisses, great therapy,
we do not get them in any kind medical, things or therapies.
in the peace, done at church I went, only
one out of three, that did, great therapy to.
Brought us all in. Each side of the cheek?
Hand shakes are so cold I think?
But I don't mean be all over each other
either. 12 years one church just hand shakes.
But last one 7 years, did, course some don't like
but all treated. everyone the same, nice and therapy
too for some and me. But watch if been drinking,
maybe. Oh! talking of drink, Editor tcook Tony, get you AbcTales mugs, buy on here, we have two, lovley
holds big mug of tea, whatever then he
kindly delivered, good and big. Great big smile, couldn't stop, 1st time of meeting him.
julie xx

Cavalcaderl | August 19, 2010 - 08:27

new skinner_jennifer
Gee! thanks honey bun!
I had rushed around, but
ont the bus suddenly, my mind
if I have one, well now? Word's
were flowing, I dived in my bag
for a pen none amongst, shopping
list for my poor friend. Time I got
home the better one mind was a blot!
Not quite right yet, Like me!
Sorry to read your son's
slipped disc on here! hope be well soon
How old give a big kiss from me x.
I put hubby's glasses on to-day, the eye
rims so dark in the mirror only 2nd. Got his
naughty four pairs not in cases, and I have 2 pairs.
Need a bell on, when loose them peculiar places.
This is absolutely true, I looked wow! comment as just added to, it go on add to it something funny.
I love to laugh, Carry on camping? Del Boy my favourite. But ner found a Reliant Robin?
Have a good week-end. I can swear with rude words
but keep them for indoors only? If he doesn't answer
or maybe hear me. This is poem how I feel. Some men
don't like shopping, or a chat! learn as the years roll on, we all change! Poem is not so true, that
last 8 years, 8 years, been the best of my life joining things, and AbcTales. After our groups of all closed, I never heard of them? before Then. It was in the paper and also heading in "The Big Issue" I buy. And our Editor t.cook (Tony) was a host for week editing poet's works. Brilliant of homeless and all groups we tried. Well letter other day from "Balmoral" on behalf of H.M.The Queen, true! from Her Lady in Waiting! as I send
birthday card's sometimes, quite collection,
but amazing to do that, but to get a reply
over the moon, and on the late Diana. Buried on my birthday, back just put name. Taken years to think or do. and address on wow answer, always, hence poem tried "Addicted To Post" by H.M The Queen, into poem story. most mine experiences had done in life, not all?? Blow me one in the Issue 21 similiar story,
happened lovely. Came true to. Mine was 2009 story
your see badly written and punctuated. But to me, damn good. To be able to do?
Have a good week-end.
julie xx

Cavalcaderl | August 20, 2010 - 23:30

new celtiman
thankyou comment, really?
I find if work at it, never the same.
"Dusty Pink" I have just done, scribble, but too many numbers so had to work it all down,
got there.
Like your's too.
julie xx