" I'M THE QUEEN OF THE SWINGERS" (IP)

Hi Julie,
I really love this story, it's so expressive.
It made me smile to think of all those characters,
playing their music and dancing.
You did good.
Jenny.

I really enjoyed too Julie, the way you describe the characters, makes them so lifelike. Well done :)

Beeme xx

Lovely Julie! The first half makes me think of the last chapter of Proverbs- from around Verse 11 on. Yours I like more.

For kiddies, all the innocence, happiness! You’ll make great granny! &&

awwh Julie I'm glad you had such a good time at the festival it sounds like lots of fun :) They played teddy bears picnic, how ironic ;) Have a great week x

Beeme xx

A Teddy Bear's Picnic ironic? How do you work that out?

This weeks IP is 'Goldilocks And The Three Bears' :)

Really love this well done Julie,I havnt been on ABC tales for a while, this story made me smile as soon as I read it :)

Lennie x

new Lennie
Nice to hear from you.
So glad made you smile.
I enjoyed trying this out,
so much, was true.
The secret I will explain
at the end of the week as
it' going for (IP) try
An added bit more.
Editor tcook says
Tony says, take it where
ever it leads you, 'Goldilock's
and The Three Bears' coming into
it somewhere.
Like reading your's too
julie xx

I will look foward to reading the next part, the three bears sounds so sweet cant wait to read it and thankyou.

Lennie xx

Nolan
Thankyou lovely
comment. I will have to read
Proverb II I am not sure at
all of that one?
I wouldn't say ironic, word
would be coincidence.
As Editor t.cook had put
(IP) for this week is'Goldilock's
and The Three Bears' bring in the
poem or story, for (IP) let it lead
wherever leads you. Happened after,
that I went to the park, three bands
one after another, but one played
Pic-nic Time For Teddy Bears. Was in fun
doing actions!
No afraid, not be no nanny.
Secret will come at then end of the (IP)
this week, maybe from me. Re- poem tried.
And I added to it, more. Glad you liked.
Have you ever watched the film The bear
necessities, all dancing bear's. or so.
julie xx

new Beeme
thankyou loovely,
yes I spelt it like that.laugh!
No it was a coincidence,
after reading this week's
idea (IP) Goldilock's and
The Three Bears'.
Editor T.Cook AbcTales Tony
said, let it lead wherever you like using
the word's so I have tried.
Then I went to park, no intention stay,and 2nd day
rained, but bands, then one out of three, played the
Teddy Bears Pic-nic. Little girl, carrying her teddy
bear, and tiny little girl, in her tu-tu, cute with
a puppy on a lead, as she ran, almost was dancing too. I got bitten by something, clothes and bag on grass. at first. Most drinking, I was gasping not for beer!
julie xx

new Cor Lennie
Thank's that was a quick answer.
To do with the character's, no
more said yet! oops?
julie x

Julie thank you! The Teddy Bear’s picnic was just a happy coincidence!
Keep well!

It's a misunderstanding- on my part. It's quite interesting I'll explain
a bit later.
Nolan

What a party! x

Julie. In Proverbs 31:11-31 virtues of women are listed, each verse has one. Now in my Bible there is a name in italic, given in front of each verse so,
Alef; Bet; Gimel; … up to Tau.
I’ve always believed these were distinct women's names, a virtue given for each. Always did looked a bit awkward like that. For example:

14. He. She is like the merchants’ ships; she bringeth her food from afar.

22. Mem. She makes herself coverings of tapestry; her clothing is her clothing is silk and purple.

Which with enough imagination, are like:

“Suzie
white dress long ringlets
driving all crackers
with her frill edged
cotton knickerbockers
could be a tennis player”

And,

“Rosebud
In her red velvet
coat and cape
bonnet shaped hat to match
with liitle stars on
predicting dreams”

As children’s versions.

The thing is I had the cat by the tail. As a list is of virtues of one woman it works out beautifully as had been intended (‘though a bit unrealistic!) When checking now I couldn’t find these names in any English translation. The names I found only in the Afrikaans, the 1933/57 translation. The names are in fact the Jewish alphabet letters in succession! Simply a list. A list for one, “a virtuous woman“, “her price is far above rubies”.

Hope you don’t mind me going to so much trouble. I get carried away sometimes. That’s why I’m unemployed.
Cheerio!

new Pipmic
So glad you liked this
try out one. Yes, it was
amazing day. How it all
worked out in the end,
but thoroughly enjoyed trying to
put this to-gether.
thankyou lovely comment.
julie x

new Nolan
Yes, different kinds of music and song's
played. Added to it now, bit long verse's.
Cheers! for comment, can't quite
find right chapter, made me look it up?
Can you tell me. please!
got to go off again pyjamas for friend
shopping again.
julie xx

Well done for the cherry Julie it is very much deserved!

Lennie xx

new Nolan
Hello! I will get back to you to-morrow.
ok and re-read the verses Proverbs, don't
know them, sorry your unemployed. Things
can change. Yes, please tell me another day.
Thankyou all your comments. Have a huge 2nd hand bible, pictures are great, so large. From a market
mine isn't religous, doesn't matter, but job to carry
this one so heavy 5op.
cheers
julie xx

Lennie
Thankyou so much I didn't
get on computer till 10 pm.
I thought bit long, and Nolan
kindly commented and some of
stanzas with a punctuation on names
etc; so may put them in.
I was going to add at the beginning,
If you go down in the park to-day
your sure of a big surprise?
Saw great cherry! so didn't bother.
Have a good week-end, bad weather.
julie x

new skinner_jennifer
Wow, thankyou, it all
part true, yesterday,there
were bands there. and we all
got dancing etc; heel toe one jiver
I know, wet threw so had tea and cake
and stayed on again. Fab; some just came to me
dance or help, I was amazed.
I am just trying it out
I can't say of description's
yet, let you know end of the (IP)
week. Like your's very much.
Try (IP) go on. But I got stung!
coats on boggy ground. Made up for
mine out, made cakes he did for bowling, team.
But thoroughly enjoyed myself.
Must have 20 joined in doing there
own thing. I just have a go.
Couldn't dress up weather, but we
all stood! the weather!
stalls were fab:
julie xx

Beeme
I Only just got in had tea,
and keyed in AbcTales. Wow!
did you here me scream, you
are a mind reader, yes I got
cherry! thank's I was just going
to put at beginning.
If you go down in the park to-day
Your sure of a big surprise1
My word I got one?
And I had added to it make
it more exciting, for (IP)
Have a good week-end, I think!
I might try Cherry! Brandy?
Hate it. cos; fed on it once!
Brandy bitter.
julie xx

Thankyou so much for the lovely
cherry! For my poem,
"I'm The Queen Of The Swingers". (IP)
I am sure you all heard the scream!
To The Editor AbcTales t.cook (Tony)
and all the at AbcTales Team.
and to:
Beeme
skinner-jennifer
Lennie
Nolan
First one ever think was Silver-Spun-Sand
But couldn't work computer, answer then.
Get quite a few, can't believe?
One from jlhamilton81
4,000 miles away, on one my poem's.
Seannelson email from America I first. commented
On his.
Pip-mic
anyone not mentioned
I was going to add at beginning,
If you go down
in the park to-day

Your be sure
of a big surprise
or cut it down.
Thankyou so much it means
so much to me.
Part was true me, and rest
imagination, but one secret?
But don't want to loose the cherry!
As I added to it, making it more exciting
I enjoyed trying it?
Thankyou cherry! pickers
But I had a spelling mistake, now corrected.
not sure how to spell, Razzmatazz
Now free gig, B/ton guess what it's called
"The Big Monkey Man Street" for fund disabled
children, in Sth. America raising money, may ask to read poem. If it doesn't pour hard?
Guess! name of free gig, if I go and ask?
called "The Big Monkey Man Street."
julie x

new Beeme
Ooh! thankyou,you are the
light that shines,
part was true yesterday.
Fill you in on the character's
at the end of the week. Surprise!
I got stung there, as most
put things on the ground
bags and clothes, we all
mainly under umbrellas,
I had tea and cake, back
again dancing. Got pair white, shoes
£3 just fitted there, I changed to. As mine
didn't see quite hard enough, downpor ground.
Two or three bands there, some coming up
to dance with me! one put a
hat on my head, stating what
a lovely dancer, I brought other's in,
one jiva great I know?
we all had dances, he is great but
to many movement's hands behind back.
I didn't know. I wanted to borrow someone's
stick, twirl a bit, no he wouldn't lend me.
needed it. I wore tightish cat jumper huge "Green Eyes" big eyes were made off sequins, the eyes bit extra large! Daughter bought after I done, my "Green Eyes" poem.
no, I just danced to the music numbers.
Elderly man does robot movement's
every year. One of the bands played "Teddy Bear's Picnic. Strange with the (IP) this week, wasn't it?
to the music. One stall had
poet cards, "are you a poet
yes," he had done himself, so I asked for a funny one
and another 50p time. Told him of AbcTales.
very keen to join. I couldn't
wear rockn'roll skirt, one had
on black flared skirt with flowers on
they wore.
weather, boggy too.
I am just reading your lovely
ones. Phones, gone all strange the lines, as I didn't
get to N/home yesterday, messages and faults said on the line.
mean't to have someone else going
didn't' turn up. I hear.
I had the time of my life!
without mine. Why wait.
Cos; of bowls team all day matches.
on and off all day, browned of with mine, in it, for a while, made them two lovely sponges, nothing done here, but to go back and say? I complained two sponges made, he used to do that, to me if I made one for church then, where is mine or our's say! rained from morning till night roughly played 10.am till 5pm.
I was furious with mine. Cheesed off.
Daughter gave quick call, kitchen being
done, burst pipe! I ask you.
I am of now. No time trying to connect.
mustn't nagg.
But the festival made my day.
julie xx

new Nolan
hello! I like
the way you have punctuated
the names. Shall I copy, that.
I had two spelling, mistakes one
in little, one not sure, dictionary,
four of them ,here, not in, means
and all that Jazz, word is Razzmatazz
found it?? If I put Speech marks to all
names, look a bit dotty! won't it.
I think will be new rule coming out
all unemployed, so hope you won't be
too long. You mention a word tapestry
why? tired, to-day. Buses come three a time
my number. Latest word is not thankyou, is
Cheers, paper states. Well! well!
Julie x

Well done Julie a very good poem; liked this one a lot. ;)

new darkenwolf
hi1! thankyou so much,
glad you liked it, most of
it was true, worked on the
character's scribbles bit back,
that's the secret, put in 'Goldie
Lock's and The Three Bear's bit.
I amazed myself! but busy, so didn't
go on computer till 10pm. Wow! a cherry!
I added to it, make it more funny and crazy.
But the cherry! was there. About 4pm ish. Made up for getting soaked. I screamed and put my hand over my mouth. But your's are very good. A Mr Wolf won! to-day didn't have a penny on it, used to do can't say why!to-day, name of a regular horse.
I am just reading your very good ones.
Very good.
julie xx

Good, I saw that you are active again Julie! You're only as old as it feels. Dementia dulls the edge so be grateful and keep at it regardless!

Congratulations on your Cherrie! Amazing! &

New Nolan
Your so kind, I now have inserted!
the name of the robot dancer !as I too
have seen him at the Brunswick Festival lawns
performing, and other places,now night clubbing
bless him in the paper and photo, breakdancing
and robotic dancing,74 to-day. Churchill Square he got into finals, so I took courage to phone him, seemed like him and copy of this, put in his name now? and our ages to. whoops.It was pouring down rain Brunswick that day. I
had bought suit friend in n/Home, didn't want,cheesed off and Ray doesn't dance,or went so stood danced jived and with some came up,Blow me one of band played "Im The King Of The Swingers".It was
fab for me. I watched brighton "My Face" one boy one girl win.The young teenagers breakdancing,and robot fab;AND Modelling, Peter right in front,so
gave him good luck card and said AbcTales now put him in poem by name and age etc;
The Argus we sent copy poem to paper but only allowed 350 words have to cut down, can't see how. The secret was their dolls Cheap, and I described all,and put in poem,added IP "Goldilocks" bit me slipping and sliding? And inserted now last stanza Editor to.Cook
ABCTALES.Com said "Let the poem story lead you wherever it will. I screamed saw cherry!
Thankyou all.
Not dementia yet, umm what did you say? on the way.
I enjoy reading your's and all.Catching up after really hectic time.Amazing work on here missed.
thankyou reading and the comments so pleased with.
We could hardly get anything,work being carried out.
All is well, at last.Some of us used to do all in
street elderly groups. Your so right your young as you feel-100 Or whatever whenever.
Still a block at moment. Think think think?
and I will try think something.But most of all
great to know where was I and was I ok.
all the best
julie x