MY DEAR LORRAINE (updated)

I love you as my little girl
And I still have your first curl
With your winning looks and smiles

I’ve nursed you when ill
and many a time cried

You're growing up now,
so big and tall
I hardly remember!
when you were small

The little hands
that gripped so tight
All the love
when you were a tiny mite

You help make cakes
and other things to

This is what mummy's
and children do

I scold you
when you're naughty

Tell you off I fear
But I love our daughter dear

Updated
for your Birthday all our love Mum xxx
This is much improved do you think,from
a year ago!2009

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Comments

Silver Spun Sand | June 13, 2009 - 17:38

Just found this little gem too. Your daughter sounds very special...but then daughters are.

Tina

Silver Spun Sand | June 13, 2009 - 21:00

She certainly does sound a daughter in a million and I wish you and yours a peaceful weekend.

I look forward to reading more of your work. I shall make a point of looking out for it.

Tina

Cavalcaderl | July 15, 2009 - 01:21

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Cavalcaderl | May 20, 2010 - 08:38

new Silver-Spun-Sand thankyou lovely comments.Big problem here, and re; Thailand.Since come back.
julie xx

Cavalcaderl | May 20, 2010 - 08:39

new julie says;
this was way way back when naughty.
I kept all years.Until joined things
and to pay company once;was a racket.
I chose later in life, By post,never done do, 1 out 3 send of they keep 2.Pay.con. then eventually writing group free.and then great Abctales.
Used.on.First time trying. Thankyou.Updated now.