MY DEAR LORRAINE Updated. June 2011. How do I keep the reads 348 from 2009

I love you as my little girl
still have your first curl
With your winning looks and smiles
I’ve nursed you when ill

Many a time cried
your'e growing up now
so big and tall
I hardly remember
when you were small

The little hands
that gripped so tight
all the love
when you were a tiny mite

You help make cakes
and other things to
this is what mummy's
and children do

I scold you
when you're naughty
tell you off I fear
but I love our daughter dear

Updated It was 364 reads, now re-set it
for your Birthday all our love Mum xxx
This is much improved do you think,from
a year ago!2009 AbcTales.How do I keep I

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MistakenMagic | May 20, 2010 - 09:12

Heart-warming Julie! There is no love like a mother's for her daughter - well done ;)

Magic xxx

Nolan | May 20, 2010 - 11:50

Short-term memory loss. Sad. But can be fun! First you forget to pull your zipper up, then you forget to pull your zipper down!

Cavalcaderl | May 21, 2010 - 08:07

-No answer.Don't know what you mean,must go.

Cavalcaderl | May 21, 2010 - 08:09

New MistakenMagic
Thankyou,lovely comment,shock
news when re-turned from country,mosquitoes and holiday.etc;
I made this up,years ago,on scrap of paper and kept,now found use for it,and should be better improved.Why is The Track column,click on.I have
Updated two,and it's come on to it twice.Do you know,looks silly.Hope exams going well.
julie xx

Silver Spun Sand | May 21, 2010 - 10:57

Good job you kept your little scrap of paper, Julie.

Keep writing;-)

Tina xx

Cavalcaderl | May 21, 2010 - 22:27

new Silver-S[un-Sand
Thanks,hello! well she was a naughty
little girl.So clever.I was always taught
her the sun and stars and flowers,beauty.
Such a shame holiday Thailand but was bitten by mosquitoes.So I have spent quite bit her birthday.
Getting old.But extra dark red roses,caused a stir
trying carry home,people commented and smiled.
All we can do is just look after them both,still working.
My Spiritual happening,was really awakening
to how I'd been suppose.years.Amazing. Trauma never knew then.Used look up dictionary right word?
"When you can't walk talk or speak
Kneel down and say a prayer
for he made the heaven and earth.
the sea and gave life to you and me.
I woke up there,after not sleeping.
so scared.
!Oh! magic shrine
you were mine when I came on bended knee
And told to shake the hands of the priest etc;
That's why all this work and help and all I try so precious to me. I look back some stories,think that was good.But needs re-doing now.
Can't reach the sky yet.Have to think,subject to do.
Time,and quiet.And the IP have so many things.
have a good week end.Just had lucozade.Yes,my mum
gave me a 50p picture Ballerina.You know who I mean.
julie xx

kheldar | May 28, 2010 - 23:39

A loving sentiment lovingly expressed. Well done.

David :--) xx

Cavalcaderl | May 30, 2010 - 20:34

new Kheldar This is updated from 2009 readings 500 Wow.
David I like yours,so interesting words
and colours are explosive! and the plots
fantastic.Unfortunately they went country,
holiday both of the loves,came back within
a year, each other .Not good news both,bitten mosquitoes as well,led to much worse.But both,in early stages,and still working.devastated do I want the good or bad news first.I came in from shopping,all happy then.They were sitting on the sette unexpected.When went,hubby new,before me,aid they didn't want to upset me.But my priest,then,7 years I'd had all help with, I managed to get put through to,console me.Mine showed no emotion,as usual.One realations been in wheelchair for years.So thank goodness,we are getting on in age.They have medication every day to do.Both under 40.It's always worse when it's your own,care for others,always ask not mine!They are in remission stages.Pray stay that way.Daughter is very clever.But already it is in families.Unfortunately,one now,has wheelchair.Hope we
are not alive if it goes worse for them.
Thankyou,have a good week end.
julie xx

Beeme | May 30, 2010 - 21:46

So, so beautiful Julie! Heart-warming :) Really well done.

Beeme xx