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Posted by Cavalcaderl on June 28, 2009 - 23:02

The snow on the mountain peaks
and the polar bears floating on
ice flows

Volcanoes erupting and cascading
colours of hot molten lava
as people run for their lives
leaving their possessions behind

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SundaysChild | June 29, 2009 - 01:42

A rather haunting snapshot of two contrasts- they connect together well, even though they feel disconnected.
Nice work.

Cavalcaderl | June 29, 2009 - 07:26

new Sundayschild what a lovely name.I forgot press submit do again.No it was very late I walked long way new shops open etc;so it was made up in 5 minutes! I am disconnected.ha1hah! and not my computer so time! is important.Great book I have read very heavy of Countries etc;called "Secret Places"! and huge bible hubby got me market wonderful coloured pictures and stories £1 I can't lift. But now I have! an imaginative mind.I was stumped for a Title. cheated Jennifer uses dictionary so I did, yours is good. any comments please. all punctuation is very hard sometimes. I will never fly!
thankyou.I only started abc may.just comp; 5 fun and added all collected day centres in my £1 file. Thankyou.

Cavalcaderl | August 16, 2009 - 03:53

What do you mean!
I am disconnected
With plenty of Tales?
Ha!hah!