Precious Things now updated from 2009
View Edit.Posted by Cavalcaderl on June 12, 2009 - 20:01
OH! Rolling river that flows
from the streams
and shooting stars to dream
The rain beating down
on the window pane
Yes!
Get up
and go out and about again
Watch the trees
wave in and out
in the breeze
Take one's hand
when they are low
or help someone across
the road
Laugh!
At the child
chattering going along
fill your heart
with a song
Sit and say a prayer
for one in need
maybe share
a cup of tea
Breath in the air
from the sea
Hotels
With flowered scents
wafting in the breeze
The hoot of a train
hear the church bells toll
a brisk walk
or just a stroll
See the beauty of life
blossoms everywhere
Love birds
kissing
without a care
The fountains
sparkling springs
Cat's washing
themselves
in the glorious sun
Little man that mumbles
as he raises his hat
holding onto his paper
and his walking stick
The dog that runs
and splashes
through the fish pond
A lady sitting in her deck chair
tan on her face
gives a smile
as she eats her cream cake
Children whizzing down the path
on their scooters
through the murky puddles
now re-done as someone noticed
kindly I am pleased.
was all in capitals
as a beginner then.
but made 300 readings.
all comments please now altered.
Comments
MistakenMagic | June 1, 2010 - 17:08
Hello Julie - I think you may have posted the poem twice here in the same post! But apart from that I love the images you create with the short lines ;)
Magic xxx
Cavalcaderl | June 1, 2010 - 23:53
new MistakenMagic
Thankyou so much telling me.
It's 2009.now all re-done and
altered bits,put comment on and
thank's don't know where it's gone.as twice
mentioned on Track.Computer's gone wobbly.
Have a good week-end.
julie xx
pinda | June 2, 2010 - 18:18
Sit and say a prayer
for one in need
maybe share
a cup of tea
Breath in the air
from the sea
That was my favorite part Julie, beautiful imagery and like Mistaken said, such great impact with short sentences.
'Say a pray for one in need'
If only more people did this...
Cavalcaderl | June 5, 2010 - 16:23
new Pinda
Thankyou so much,wow
must be an improvement,year now.
Well not manage church always
there,used be prayer partner
spiritually,and physically
he did all.and priests,then
good see your back,hope well
Computer or me up the creek!
I added and altered this 2009 now.
I like reading yours to.No!cure and
couldn't do a thing.many years.
love and care of,
The mighty one,done it all.
That's another story.
I am trying to do one,
good without exposing to much if
you get my meaning.Or delete parts,
before editing.
bless you+
julie xx