On Such A Beautiful Day

Julie, this one made me smile, all the way through, and then, laugh out loud at the very end.

The one thing I can say is, it is very right, and beautiful too;-)

Tina xx

You do have a lot of remedies for a bad day. Thanks Julie- shall have to remember them all.

;)Pia

A very charitable poem in the rough Julie - typos and all. Of the children, I take it you meant "teach them to listen" ...?

A lot going on in this and worth working through to the finishing line.

Lots of Love

Hi julie,

I love your interpretation of what to do on a
Beautiful day and as Tina said, it really made me
smile.

I think poetry is a wonderful way to express your
feelings, so you keep writing and enjoy.

Hope your Sunday is a Sunny, Peaceful one.

Jenny.xx

new Highhat
Hello! Pia;
Sometimes one has to have been
there? Before achieve all can do?
Thankyou for your comment lovely.
Did you write poem on, music if wrong!
sorry if did,and I have the right country!
Have or do you remember "The Little Dutch
Boy" and The Little Dutch Girl" song sat dreaming
on a hill. Just come to me. As stirred many songs up
us all to remember.
This is poem three days, all gone wrong,then all happenings mainly included in poem.
Hope your well!
Hot Summer weather to-day after yesterday stopped in.
Have a good day.
all the best
julie xx

new Blessings
Hi! Thanks lovley commnets.
Yes, it is a rough! poem like
you say three day's of happenings
and all gone wrong! Hence the poem
included most. I could alter it like
you say kindly, but it was happening
there and then so left take them! what
do you say.Before some baby, mum held it's hands
bouncing on her lap to music another part of street!
Hope not getting sun burnt.
It was five minute poem,trying
get four stanzas in line, had drop
to beginning for next stanza if followed
on. See Mum's were there then? So taken them
and out push chair put onto the ground etc;
Have a good week-end.
julie xx

I remember The little Drummerboy by Gunther Grass- weird story- horses heads used as bait for eels by the seaside. They love carcasses those eels- I don't care to eat eels too often...

ne Highhat
Oh! yes so do I.
Rumpa Pump Pum was it.
Think maybe the same one.
I only mentioned the other
title song,as think you wrote
title about music, didn't you?
And maybe libved in Holland forgotten.
Went on Tick tock, tick tock went the
funny old clock, and the wheels went round
and round? Didn't want say wrong country!
Write about it. I remember the brother's then young,
then used to go fishing, brought back live eels,
wriggling in a bag! made me feel squiffy!
Thanks coming back and commenting.
a girl and I in an office, much younger than me,
we planned go to Holland fly 1st time, to-gether
both did two jobs, coffe bars, saved went put deposit down next week, too late booked up, for The Bulb field's so never went.
have a good day. Watching x factor shame they all cry,
going home, then not, lot to take on young ones.
julie xx

Hi Julie. Next time I'm having a bad day I'm going to pop back here and read this again as a prescription to put a smile back on my face.

new oldpesky
Hi! Well you sound as
if you have a lovley missus
and son, say hello! Gorgeous
when little.
Thanks for comment,I scribbled bit,
but it was an awful day? So hence the poem.
You could do one, about toilet roll??
Brightons had great trade owing to the extra
not weather, busses no air,at the back I sit,
cos have to have high seats. Roads are up.
Everyone is out shopping,or wining and dining.
Mine hates shopping me!
take care the Greek Dance one had stick,lift
the leg up bent, and other hand put the stick
down, slow march more and couple men, as well.
Far to hot stay,no seats other side of square
julie xx

new HighHat
Hello! hope all is well.
Just an opology, re song
I got it wrong,posted to you
by mistake, now see it was or should
been for Maggyvaneijk, Holland. but it was interesting hope, wasn't it. Funny you mentioned
eels, I mentioned wheels. Keep those songs coming?
Now typed it onto Maggyvaneijk. Lovely weather.
Drop in temperature by Friday could be snow, ridiculous. Parts Scotland have! High lands.
julie xx

your poems always cheer me up Julie - that's a wonderful gift. :-)

Hi Julie :) I hope your not to bad.

Like the comments have already said, it made me laugh and loved it and its perfect the way you wrote it!!!!!
The end made me laugh even more, but it would of worked even without that :)))) because its gooood lol

great read, well done :)

Keep Writing
Keep Smiling :)

Trish x

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Hello Julie.

"...smile at the people wherever you roam..."

I can't think of a better way to start a day.
Take care.

ps I have said it before, I think you should get all your reply posts together and put them in a little book.

I enjoy reading them all.

.

"When things go wrong
walk on Walk on"

Such a positive, motivational piece Julie.

new skinner_jennifer
Hi! Jenny, thankyou lovely
comment. Been three really blue
day's. have a good week-end.
julie blessings xx

new maggyvaneijk
Hello! are you better.
It was how I felt.
Some of poems so sad at
the moment arn't they.
j x

new Prettyrose
Hi! Trish No! ok!
What have you been doing?
Sound as if you have a lot
to deal with as well as most.
Thankyou lovley comments.
Hope your feeling brighter too!
julie xx

new Blighters rock Letter
Hope you get good news soon.
Hi! Richard, gee! coming
from clever talented writer
like you? What a great compliment,
friend forever. It was a combination
of damn,happenings leading up to all
of this after happened. All gone wrong.
Shame x factor Terry Winstanley from Tarring Worthing, didn't get through his heat, nice voice more like Tom Jones.Great voice.
Knew all the words too. Maybe one more number
song of Tom Jones he would have.
Well done visiting your mum in nursing home,
not easy at all.Cut this down too long.
Luigi thinks sad poem gets the cherries!
But must admit not cherrries! I can't take them,
at moment so much happening. Reading "Starlings book.
Mixed stories. Great just finished.
Hope things soon be improved for you.
julie x

new fatboy74
Hello! what a beautiful,comment
it was difficult week all gone wrong.
Beyond understanding three of them text;
mesages. Not past on, all gone wrong! So hence to took myself out! Most of poem says. I like reading yours very good. Hope all is well with you?
take care julie x

oldpesky
Hi. You do that I need cheering!
Up right now! With a funny story of
yours.It was events lead up to the poem
If I am not told.
At moment finding sad poems,on expressing details
of life's medical details,making me feel worse.To me
why be morbid life is so short sometimes.Way I feel.
At the moment give it a week.
Come on send bunny funny one!
j x

new ScoZen
Hello! Hope all is well
for you too. It was a fowl!
Three day's, so poem more or less
says it all. Difficult times, and
more sad news now? Off to see Judy Garland
"Under The Rainbow" be great, mine won't go
love all the musicals. But did take me Chichester Cathedral beautiful and the cafe restaurant,then into
Art exhibition great 2o rooms, bit expensive big house. One of the big issue, seller' I buy from got
his,marvellous paintings, on show through someone's help being recognised, I have seen his work some at
so pleased for him in all adversity. Thanks great comment. I'm getting older,
don't like you all hassle, getting.
Have good week-end. Do you mean replies back to me,
or my stupid ones sometimes back them?
take care. Mine has such a different personality very
hard connection? Have to share computer, now we like ships in the night!
Have a good week-end. Like all of yours, write so well.Even toilet roll in shop, needed hit my on the nose! to high reach, go on laugh! had jippy inside out.
cavalcader (julie x

New Silver-Spun-Sand
Tina, hello! I have taken the S of he end of my poem "Pianists".
and re-titled "Hat's Off" too Naughty Boy what do you think be honest.Glad made you laugh,it had
Been two day's of hell,then three us
sung n/home, may give out music sheet book,or percussion paper one can collect germs too, and guitarist played from,centre,may have been the tea,drank there,or Oasis orange real fruity, then cuppa rose a lea, on top scrambled eggs restaurant tea hour later. Iffy stomache.
have a good week-end
julie xx