Heavy machinery
zoomed off
at a terrific pace
but man did get on the moon
The moon draws the rivers
the banks will overflow
my pop always told me
long a go
We have planets
Jupiter and mars
and beautiful shining stars
Man and science have got to clever
testing sending things up to heaven
Earthquakes tsunami's
I believe
are buildup of acids and gases
volcanoes erupting
Pressure of water
racing through the seas
at amazing mph
damns can be made
and sand banks too
When the sea is calm
it is a wonderful sight
but the high tides
are not man's delight
Nothing stops!
Gushing water and rivers
by the moon
especially at this time
it's coming closer to earth
But the creator
bible states
when these things happen
You hear of earthquakes
and things melt away
family break ups
and hardships
don't be afraid
God's word will never go away
all over the world will pray
For Japan
and World Peace.
all comments please not sure this
need all help on this try please.
Now thought try this for the (IP)
Comments
Silver Spun Sand | March 14, 2011 - 21:33
Julie - this is so special. One of your best. Its message - inspirational.
Tina
Cavalcaderl | March 14, 2011 - 21:44
new Silver-Spun-Sand
Hi! Tina your so kind
I know what I mean but not quite
right yet! I need all feed back on this.
But pop studied knowledge, plus everything
in life taught us some good some bad all came true.
The papers state 33ft waves. We had a ceiling leak,
plummers called all switched off. Like a bath if it over flows can't be stopped the pressure of horror.
thankyou so much. I stayed up all night when man got on the moon wrote all down, pop bed ridden then never
thought get on the moon. When land in the sea explosion and force gravity who knows. Can't say happened last week and dream amazing.
julie xx
Silver Spun Sand | March 14, 2011 - 22:03
Hi again, Julie. Have sent you some feedback. Check your email;-)
Well done, again.
Tina xx
pinda | March 14, 2011 - 23:18
Beautiful peace, truly well written.
X
Pinda
How've you been Julie?
skinner_jennifer | March 14, 2011 - 23:21
Hi julie,
I think you have explained yourself very well in
this piece, it's good to get the words down, which
is what you have done, go with your feelings and
you will be fine.
Thanks for the read.
Jenny.
Silver Spun Sand | March 14, 2011 - 23:32
It's just great, Julie. No worries;-)
Tina xx
Cavalcaderl | March 14, 2011 - 23:35
new Pinda
H! Thanks all true. Glad like this one
Silver-Spun done a good job helping me
set it out looks great. Well what a week.
Trip indoors up bedroom steps arms fall,
fell for "Colin Forth" could say, daughter
taking me see "The King's Speech" brilliantly
acted. Knees owch. Then she treating me see The Black Swan high boots she bought me kindly wedged heel hurry mum over lights, bang wham down pavement, see it was metal takns like electricity but edge all round. Now things back to normal. ood luck black cat
always comes in "Jazz" my poem "Green Eyes",
How have you been keeping. "The Kng's Speech" won best actor four awards.
julie xx
Cavalcaderl | March 14, 2011 - 23:51
new Silver-Spun-Sand
Hi! Tina will do many thanks.
Looking foreward help and text of this
Well it is absolutely brill; way you have done
it, but have added since is it better or not planets
and stars etc. Rays at snooker so quietly having a go. Brain and things gone muggy for a while.
Can't work email get back to you yet. Thankyou so much for your trouble and the setting of it, it's tops now. Japans waves 33 ft high. Please if can read re; putting planets and stars in be greatful corrected spelling mistakes. Or better without I will re do it just as you have greatly done.
So had answer your email on here, is that ok.
How does it read now all your marvellous help.
Should I have pressed reply to you, I pressed on email name. What do you think now.Got email to work now to you had press reply.worked. What do you think.
julie xx
Cavalcaderl | March 15, 2011 - 00:03
new Skinner_jennifer
Thankyou lovely comment.
Lost your previous answer back
to you. So brief you, it was all true,
but great help and re-set as asked further
help and words correct, cos brain's been dud,
and eatrs mutton jeff. sent me nice email couldn't
reply Ray's at snooker, just come in, didn't work
now pressed reply gone through. I knew what meant
couldn't explain well, Tina has re-set great readings
gone up, made my day and week. Get back to-morrow or
weds.My previous reply said more, lost it. Off to bed now. Thanks. I wasn't sure like you how it be accepted.
Have a good week. Enjoy your's done so well.
julie xx