The Absinthe Room

It is the green hour when my love arrives;
shrugging off life's bristling threads,
her exquisite liquid nakedness,
she soothes my brow with sweet palms
chill as iced water, her visage
milky opalescence, la louche, where
wild scents bloom: crisp fennel;
rich anise; wormwood.

Do you sleep? I know the evening
and the metal dawn. I work with
absolute materials: everything
and nothing.

A dreaming drowned man,
my mistress, glacial sage,
of such delicate health
she must sleep behind
UV-proof glass.

Suddenly the window is white.
Too much sun; the rush that burns.
Her fading footsteps.

I know a pure, clear-headed love.

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Comments

JoseHdz | July 9, 2011 - 23:07

love it~!

i found this to be very well-written and fluid.

congrats on the well-deserved cherries ;)

cheers,

jose hernandez diaz.

Highhat | July 10, 2011 - 03:38

some very beautiful words

;)Pia

seashore | July 10, 2011 - 08:45

I agree - beautiful writing

fatboy74 | July 11, 2011 - 22:14

love this.

chant | July 18, 2011 - 14:15

thanks jose! :-)

chant | July 18, 2011 - 14:16

thanks Pia, most gracious of you to say so.

chant | July 18, 2011 - 14:16

hi seashore thanks for your generous comment.

chant | July 18, 2011 - 14:17

thanks fb. :-)