It is the green hour when my love arrives;
shrugging off life's bristling threads,
her exquisite liquid nakedness,
she soothes my brow with sweet palms
chill as iced water, her visage
milky opalescence, la louche, where
wild scents bloom: crisp fennel;
rich anise; wormwood.
Do you sleep? I know the evening
and the metal dawn. I work with
absolute materials: everything
and nothing.
A dreaming drowned man,
my mistress, glacial sage,
of such delicate health
she must sleep behind
UV-proof glass.
Suddenly the window is white.
Too much sun; the rush that burns.
Her fading footsteps.
I know a pure, clear-headed love.

Comments
JoseHdz | July 9, 2011 - 23:07
love it~!
i found this to be very well-written and fluid.
congrats on the well-deserved cherries ;)
cheers,
jose hernandez diaz.
Highhat | July 10, 2011 - 03:38
some very beautiful words
;)Pia
seashore | July 10, 2011 - 08:45
I agree - beautiful writing
fatboy74 | July 11, 2011 - 22:14
love this.
chant | July 18, 2011 - 14:15
thanks jose! :-)
chant | July 18, 2011 - 14:16
thanks Pia, most gracious of you to say so.
chant | July 18, 2011 - 14:16
hi seashore thanks for your generous comment.
chant | July 18, 2011 - 14:17
thanks fb. :-)