The Hunger

Plato Rd, libertine academy, in pairs
jackals pass, dealing, sprawled body
kerbside, out cold – worked for him.
Hunting blood category AB negative,
‘I’m just a poor boy,’ I confide, but no
juice and I hate them for being wrong.
This is hell’s fourth circle. Billionaires
man tills, load shelves, detoxing cash
habits with reward points. Hard pulse.
Hunger. And on a dime my luck turns.
But you look too young in your Brioni
suit, a love-bitten throat, AB negative,
waning. Compromise dulls the blood,
tell ‘em, prophet; soon it won’t matter.
Easing off, drawing out the black knife.

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Comments

fatboy74 | March 21, 2011 - 11:04

intense and v.good.

Highhat | March 21, 2011 - 18:04

Wow- exotic in a way if you understand? A sort of exotic hoodie rap with clench in it. I'm sure that doesn't make sense but they are the first words that come to mind- that is what this evoked in me. Thanks

chant | March 22, 2011 - 09:13

thanks fb!

chant | March 22, 2011 - 09:13

hey Highhat thanks for reading and commenting. :-)

the unfolding head | March 22, 2011 - 15:58

Chant - I really like this;

"This is hell’s fourth circle. Billionaires
man tills, load shelves, detoxing cash
habits with reward points."

:)

chant | March 24, 2011 - 14:29

thanks unfolding head!