Kings of Tomorrow

Humming to myself on Denmark Street,
charcoal-suited. Shuttered stores,
N29s pass. Atop a post box, Eliot's
pinstripe trilby, him leafing a Metro.
These days, he hangs with black kids
and lesbians mainly. Once, invited
to a premiere, amidst limelit couples,
Eliot, the pale doll on his arm, a shop
mannequin. At least he had the sense
to dress it. We’re for the Phoenix club.
Hours of dance I can take or leave, but
good conversation’s a rose in London.
Tonight the blind songmen are singing
for their freedom, and the lawmen
who sought to have Eliot gagged, they
couldn't lay a finger on him. We detour.
Scrunched plastic of rainfall, in green
scrubs, I remember the anaesthetist
putting me out. ‘Sometimes,’ he said,
‘we dream.’ Unpicking a knot of blunt
railings, Georgian terraces, Spring
just round the corner.

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Comments

Highhat | May 17, 2011 - 11:04

I really liked this

RachelPatricia | May 17, 2011 - 11:16

Me too -

N29s pass. Atop a post box, Eliot's
pinstripe trilby, him leafing a Metro.
These days, he hangs with black kids
and lesbians mainly. Once, invited
to a premiere, amidst limelit couples,
Eliot, the pale doll on his arm, a shop
mannequin. At least he had the sense
to dress it. We’re for the Phoenix club.
Hours of dance I can take or leave, but
good conversation’s a rose in London.

- Genius ;)

seashore | May 17, 2011 - 14:04

Great writing making a great read.

ScoZen | May 18, 2011 - 16:05

Enjoyed this

"...I remember the anaesthetist putting me out..."

Lovely touch.

chant | May 31, 2011 - 15:01

thanks Highhat

chant | May 31, 2011 - 15:02

hello penandpaperdreams, thanks for commenting.

chant | May 31, 2011 - 15:03

thanks for your generous comment, seashore.

chant | May 31, 2011 - 15:03

thanks ScoZen. :-)