Tomorrow

Here all day racing
on steel wings,
toasting the ozone,
turf-marking.

Coarse faces,
on their shoulders,
white fuzz, where
they've hacked.

Lunatic, gangster
laughs, they've
scorched hearts,
garbage hearts.

'Out the way, mate!'
they shout, this time
I let them. But
tomorrow?

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Comments

Louise178 | August 23, 2010 - 10:27

Brilliant, my favourite word at the moment is detritus, so this excellent in my opinion!

insertponceyfre... | August 23, 2010 - 18:41

I really like this too Chant

lenchenelf | August 23, 2010 - 23:34

:D Cracking. atb lena xx

chant | August 24, 2010 - 14:52

thanks Louise!

chant | August 24, 2010 - 14:53

thanks Jean-Pierre!

chant | August 24, 2010 - 14:53

hello Lena, thanks for reading & commenting.