Home

Surrender

Posted by Choosemyheart on January 28, 2012 - 15:56
from the ABC set Attempting Poetry

Yes, I hold a flag
But not one for any religion or country
My symbol is white and clean
I wave it in the air
Hoping it's clear
I don't hold it to surrender
I wave it for peace

Discuss this piece in the abctales forum


Comments

L G Meadows | January 28, 2012 - 16:04

Yes, give peace a chance. Enjoyed the read

Choosemyheart | January 28, 2012 - 16:29

Thank you for the feedback! :)

shoe | January 30, 2012 - 19:25

Very nicely done.