Disappearing trick.

Words coming out one by one,
The poem's over before it's begun.

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Comments

Silver Spun Sand | February 26, 2009 - 17:56

Now that's what I call short and sweet:-) Succinct - most certainly.

Tina

chuck | February 26, 2009 - 18:16

Thanks Tina. Poetry isn't really my strong suit.

Belle Green | February 26, 2009 - 19:24

It's very difficult to write a short poem like this that actually leaves an impression, but you've done it here so well. Nice job.

chuck | February 26, 2009 - 20:50

Thank you Belle Green. Just one of those off-the-cuff things you know. I actually deleted it the first time because I thought it was daft.

Crackersville | February 26, 2009 - 22:07

Acute observation number 3! ;)

chuck | February 26, 2009 - 22:36

Thanks Crack. I seem to be blessed with an inexhaustible supply of acute observations. Oops there goes another one.

Crackersville | February 26, 2009 - 22:49

Do me a favour friend, don't call me Crack. I hate it. Call me Cracker/s. Please.

chuck | February 26, 2009 - 23:29

Right you are Cracker/s. I'll try to remember.

FTSE100 | February 26, 2009 - 23:50

And don't call me FOO, okay? ;)

This poem has the greatest reads for the fewest lines of anything on the site! A cute observation if ever I saw one, it is. Maybe a one-word poem would be a best seller?

Nathan Bednarek | February 27, 2009 - 00:00

I love this! Short, sweet and effective!

Well done.

Nathan.

jecas35 | April 14, 2009 - 22:44

Nice