Words coming out one by one, The poem's over before it's begun.
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Silver Spun Sand | February 26, 2009 - 17:56
Now that's what I call short and sweet:-) Succinct - most certainly.
Tina
chuck | February 26, 2009 - 18:16
Thanks Tina. Poetry isn't really my strong suit.
Belle Green | February 26, 2009 - 19:24
It's very difficult to write a short poem like this that actually leaves an impression, but you've done it here so well. Nice job.
chuck | February 26, 2009 - 20:50
Thank you Belle Green. Just one of those off-the-cuff things you know. I actually deleted it the first time because I thought it was daft.
Crackersville | February 26, 2009 - 22:07
Acute observation number 3! ;)
chuck | February 26, 2009 - 22:36
Thanks Crack. I seem to be blessed with an inexhaustible supply of acute observations. Oops there goes another one.
Crackersville | February 26, 2009 - 22:49
Do me a favour friend, don't call me Crack. I hate it. Call me Cracker/s. Please.
chuck | February 26, 2009 - 23:29
Right you are Cracker/s. I'll try to remember.
FTSE100 | February 26, 2009 - 23:50
And don't call me FOO, okay? ;)
This poem has the greatest reads for the fewest lines of anything on the site! A cute observation if ever I saw one, it is. Maybe a one-word poem would be a best seller?
Nathan Bednarek | February 27, 2009 - 00:00
I love this! Short, sweet and effective!
Well done.
Nathan.
jecas35 | April 14, 2009 - 22:44
Nice
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Silver Spun Sand | February 26, 2009 - 17:56
Now that's what I call short and sweet:-) Succinct - most certainly.
Tina
chuck | February 26, 2009 - 18:16
Thanks Tina. Poetry isn't really my strong suit.
Belle Green | February 26, 2009 - 19:24
It's very difficult to write a short poem like this that actually leaves an impression, but you've done it here so well. Nice job.
chuck | February 26, 2009 - 20:50
Thank you Belle Green. Just one of those off-the-cuff things you know. I actually deleted it the first time because I thought it was daft.
Crackersville | February 26, 2009 - 22:07
Acute observation number 3! ;)
chuck | February 26, 2009 - 22:36
Thanks Crack. I seem to be blessed with an inexhaustible supply of acute observations. Oops there goes another one.
Crackersville | February 26, 2009 - 22:49
Do me a favour friend, don't call me Crack. I hate it. Call me Cracker/s. Please.
chuck | February 26, 2009 - 23:29
Right you are Cracker/s. I'll try to remember.
FTSE100 | February 26, 2009 - 23:50
And don't call me FOO, okay? ;)
This poem has the greatest reads for the fewest lines of anything on the site! A cute observation if ever I saw one, it is. Maybe a one-word poem would be a best seller?
Nathan Bednarek | February 27, 2009 - 00:00
I love this! Short, sweet and effective!
Well done.
Nathan.
jecas35 | April 14, 2009 - 22:44
Nice