You, held all the bad memories,
things I've tried to forget
and traveled far for that.
I, all the good ones;
and I keep returning
to this private Babel,
where the highest tower
of asking for one's
forgiveness is built
upon a second chance
at Love, eager as always,
for one more try.
Your absence is my damnation;
Wish you had taken away
the unfinished monument,
along with the lingua of your heart.

Comments
littleditty | November 16, 2009 - 11:52
Benny -i like your style x
Crackersville | November 16, 2009 - 11:55
Thanks :-)
Silver Spun Sand | November 16, 2009 - 16:26
Good poem;-)
Tina
Crackersville | January 2, 2010 - 04:11
Thank you very much Tina :-))
Done some editing. Happy New Year ladies
Benny-EL.
littleditty | January 2, 2010 - 08:57
yep Benny - it's ace - so, you're a Romance writer? :D xx
Crackersville | January 2, 2010 - 09:29
I'm a romantic soul of the meta-nihilistic kind. *weeps*
littleditty | January 2, 2010 - 12:14
you poor thing - fancy a burger? ld xx
Crackersville | January 6, 2010 - 16:18
Do I fancy a burger...