Of Dreaming

The grace of a day’s hands
And the dignity of all the words
Are like the sea blossoming
In with fitful sleep uttered
Again and here the faces
Fall from my mind
And eyes settle
Upon the waters
Of a skewed perception,
Floating without destination
Across the molten liquid
People that filtered
Through this day and that,
The turning of glances
That look and these twitched
Images pass through the mind
And lapse back to
A singular event
Or some dim error
Committed now a crime
Gut wrenching at midnight,
It sends waves that bristle
To shore and sand
Where seabirds land
And guard their watches
From stones wet with my thoughts
That drift this way and that,
My eyes that open and close
The day’s doors where now

I may be chased through tunnels,

I may have hands open to catch crumbling teeth,

I may be riding on the back of a killer whale,

Or caught in storms where trees
kneel and bend like full lips
To kiss the end of the world,

Even the holes in the road
Seem to mean something
Whilst it all too means nothing
It is elusive and is it by design
That drunken dreams
Are stitching hems
To life less wholesome
Though somewhere a truth?

Nevertheless, it raises wings
And dust and seems to stay
Yet only leaves its shadow.

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Comments

blackjack-davey | March 25, 2008 - 23:49

I've had a few pints of Broadside and this poem seems to make sense. I like the gulls. 'Blossoming in with fitful sleep' could, I think, be clearer. But congratulations on all the poem you've been writing. Every time I've got something intelligent to say you write a new one.

Doeslittle | March 25, 2008 - 23:57

Ha ha...it probably is the beer you know. I think you're right about that line...even I'm not entirely sure what I meant by it now and I've only had a few pints of tea. I think I meant to conjure up the sense of dreaming being in fits and bursts and similar to the sea washing in and out...isn't exactly clear though is it... I'll think about it.

blackjack-davey | March 26, 2008 - 00:11

Nice ebb and flow and the reader supplies other details - I see lots of herring gulls squawking on shingle banks. I knew what 'blossoming in' meant but cadence wise it's a bit odd.

Have you read Mervyn Peake's poem about the ruined faces he sees in the dark before he falls asleep? He develops the idea of the mind as besieged citadel...

Doeslittle | March 26, 2008 - 23:19

Ah...I thought you meant it was unclear meaning wise. No, I haven't re Mervyn Peake's poem - I tried to look for it too, but couldn't find it on the internet. What's the title?