Other Where

By D Marie

Mon, 27 Apr 2015
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I came back to find my feet,

to try again

 

I brought with me a message,

which I dropped

at 19

and am now looking for

 

I'm soothed by nature,

similar to the beauty

I'd left behind

 

I pine for some far-flung

other where,

a tree covered world

with velvety air

 

my lungs were satisfied there,

I could be myself

 

 

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Submitted by hilary west on

Nice wistful little ditty. I like the sentiment you could be yourself in the land of 'velvety air'!

 

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Submitted by Philip Sidney on

I like the idea of 'other where'.

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Submitted by torscot on

 

"...I pine for some far-flung ​other where, a tree covered world with velvety air..."

Let me know when you find it before climate change destroys all

 

 
 

 

torscot