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BLEEDING OBVIOUS - 30 Word IP

Posted by Dynamaso on April 2, 2009 - 00:43
from the ABC set Poetry & Song Lyrics

You stained the rug
while bleeding obvious.
I tried to staunch
your wounded pride;
bandage your ego.
As much as it hurts
you’ll know not to
point it out again.

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Comments

threeleafshamrock | April 2, 2009 - 11:45

You are really into this short stuff mate and it obviously suits you; very good, class piece again!

Chris

Dynamaso | April 2, 2009 - 23:59

Chris, thanks again for reading and enjoying, my friend. Your support means a lot to me.