I am not a circus
I don’t possess three rings
Although sometimes
Sawdust clouds my thoughts
I am not a multiplex
With mega-surround sound
All one would hear
Would be tinnitus feedback
I am not street
I don’t mime, balance or juggle
Although occasionally
It would appear as though I try
What I am is music
Acoustic and low
As heard in a quiet bar
After a filling meal
What I am is a small stage
Ambient lighting and atmosphere
A stool and a microphone
A gentle hello and welcome
What I am is applause
Appreciation of an original piece
Lovingly composed
And dedicated to no one but you
Comments
Dendrite | August 26, 2008 - 08:52
Really great, I like the symmetry and comparisons, very nuanced and holds back, leaves a good feeling.
Dynamaso | August 26, 2008 - 11:48
Dendrite, thanks very much for your comments. Hopefully, it also fits in with the Inspiration Point challenge as well.
Doeslittle | August 27, 2008 - 11:45
I think it definitely fits the IP challenge. I liked it very much - especially the first three stanzas - excellent.
Dynamaso | August 28, 2008 - 01:23
Doeslittle, thanks again for your considered comments.
tcook | August 28, 2008 - 10:08
An excellent rise to the IP - it's not meant to be a challenge, it's meant to be Inspiration!
Dynamaso | August 29, 2008 - 00:13
Tony, thanks very much for your comment and the cherry.
Inspiration can happen for anyone but the challenge is whether said inspiration can be put to good use.