Clockwork Memories

Outside the sky is blistering,
in here air bubbles mute.
I breathe it, sour, boiling over.

Surroundings become hazy
through cigarettes and a
miasma of broken thoughts;
to me, the ash is a very
faint wreckage.

I think I was murdered here
some time ago.

I watch minutes bend, shatter
and fall from the clock,
becoming dead hours
smothering the day.

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Comments

MistakenMagic | February 8, 2010 - 16:20

Beautifully dark poem, Esmerelda! I love the images in that first stanza and the ending is sinister yet perfect ;)

Magic xxx

Cavalcaderl | February 8, 2010 - 23:44

new Esmeralda
Yes, it's very moving
I like the first stanza.
Outside the sky is blistering,
in here air bubbles mute.
I breathe it,sour,boiling over.
good.
julie

Esmerelda | February 9, 2010 - 09:59

thank you :)